Daisy

I'm a thirty-two year old mom of two beautiful children. I love reading fantasy and romance stories, and now I'm writing my second book! I hope you enjoy reading it!

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Strange, but good.

You have asked me to read your short story. To be honest, It is not my genre, but still you captivated me into reading it.
I'm not sure why you chose it to be this short though. You have enough imagination to spread this story into a lot of chapters. But on the other hand, maybe you wrote it this short to leave the drama in the readers mind, thinking about all the good things that could have happened to her if things would have been different.

But I like the character of Laura, and the drama that swirls around in your story. Only the edge of the cliff knows what happened to her.

Good luck in writing more stories!

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Nice story

I always appreciate it when people are honest to me so dont get me wrong when you read this. It is just my opinion :)

I have read the whole story and i like all the chapters and the imagination you used to fill the story. But this book could have been twice as long because i felt that you jumped from chapter tot chapter quite quickly and sometimes without telling more of the background of some things. For example, suddenly there was the chapter where she decided to leave the pack and where she said she thought about leaving for a long time. But you never gave me the idea earlier in the book that she wanted to leave.
And another example is where the treaty is formed and signed, its just one chapter. I found it a bit to easy that such a treaty of this significance, a treaty between an always rivalry existence between wherewolves and vampires was signed and agreed upon in just one chapter.

And another thing is that i had to read back sometimes because there are a lot of persons and names and familytree builds that i got a bit confused as to who belonged where sometimes. But this just might be me :)

But again, i've read your complete story so apparently you kept my interest :) :)

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The lost princess

I have binge read it in one day! Love your story writing. You keep the tension just enough, not too long to get bored. I love the characters, you explain their behaviour perfectly.

Keep up the food work!

And if you ever like to read someone else's fantasy, romance story, please give my book a try! πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™

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Sexy bodyguard.

I really love the progress of your book! It is fun, exciting and a treat to read. It was for work and travel that i didnt got the chance to read it all at once, otherwise I would have! πŸ˜„
The characters are fun, not too much detailed in description, (Love the mom!) to leave a gap open for the readers imagination. And even though the age difference is substantial, their love doesn't feel awkward at all.

Have fun in writing the sequel. You got a vote from me!

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Nice book.

I liked this book, although some parts reminded me of fifty shades of grey. You have some great imagination so I advice you, to use it more often, to make it more of your own. It was captivating me though, to read the whole thing. Keep up the good work!

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Good series of books!!

I'm bingereading all of your books! They are amazing, short, but easy to read. I love how you display the characters, all very much caring of their mates, but all of them are slightly different. No boredom to find!

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Great serie of books!

I love all of it. The drama in it even made me cry! But thats a good thing. The way you write this story, makes me feel so intensly connected to the characters. Never had i gotten a confused moment, even though there are alot of characters. Its clean writing and all very well explained.

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Amazing

I really like the story. It keeps me captivated, awaiting in suspence for "the" moment. They are a match made in heavens moonlight!

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A really good book!

Love this book!!

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Amazing!!

This book is amazing!

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Great story!

I really liked this book!! Is there more coming???

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Great book!

I really like the way you write! The use of words and the build up tension is great! I read it in just a few hours.

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Super!

So, to whom are you going to give the rights to make this into a movie?? β€πŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ

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Amazing!

Great story! I love the way you write. The first part untill the moment they found out to be mates, took quite some time. But you kept me in suspense in such a way that it wasnt a bore to read.
And the part where she got drunk made me laugh out loud where my husband asked me what was funny and just looked to me strangely haha.

Great work!

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Love it!

So far i havent been reading much of this kind of stories yet but i very much like this one. Its not just the same old story about a girl with an alpha, you gave it a twist with 'the hunt' part. A twist that i couldnt imagine to come up with.
I like the way you write, you can see a clear picture of how you imagine it would look like for real. The forest, the wolves, the men :). So keep up the good work!

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