desireewolf

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mortal embarrassment and other flirting techniques

This was an amazing story. The one reason that I didn't rate the plot a four was due to the fact of little foreshadowing to the major advent of Hodge. I felt like it was just thrown in the loop of things for a plot twist. (an amazing one at that.) That would be more or less the only reason for a slightly less rating. I also felt like the characters were out of character; however, it is your story to do whatever you want to do with it, so I did not consider that in my rating. Over all, AMAZING!

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