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Every fiber of my being wanted to take the original review down completely, because of how much attention it's gotten. I read the whole story again, back to front, and my opinion on it still hasn't changed. While I admit that parts of my original review were wrong, I still believe what it originally said. It's got great potential within its flaws.

I offered criticisms, and they weren't positive because I wanted more, I wanted to see it go above and beyond. And I got grilled alive because of it. So I change my review to something sweet and to the point. Congratulations, Inkitt.

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