Dia

𝐎𝐡, 𝐡𝐞𝐲 👋🏽 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐢𝐧 ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

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Pretty good plot and overall story. Writer occasionally slips from past tense to present, but the plot points don’t become muddled, so that’s easy to ignore. Plot points are detailed and paragraphs are descriptive. One piece of advice I’d give the author is to work on “Show, Don’t Tell” exercises to really enhance the story.

Overall, good story 💕

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