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Awful

This might be better than a G.I. Joe movie if half the dialogue wasn't about cell phones. The author seems to firmly believe that sentences should be terminated with commas approximately 80% of the time. There is verb tense inconsistency throughout the text, which is also filled with run-on sentences.

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