While I do not consider myself a bona fide poet, I have written my share of them, and have a sense of where poetry falls among our creative efforts. One of my favorite poetic styles is rhyme, although I can appreciate free verse.
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Avoid is written with a consistent meter and rhyming structure that holds the attention of the reader. Love and relationships are the mainstays of popular poetry, but without specific imagery, a poem easily devolves into vague and helpless feelings.
I like the way Avoid flows, and I like the tight, consistent structure. It is a worthy addition to the world of poetry. Without offering unwarranted advice, I would simply say on a personal level that I would appreciate the imagery of a wounded heart.