thestoryteller309

I hope that i can reach you through my writing and would like actual constructive criticism to improve .

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I really like the way you wrote your story , it's refreshing and takes a dive into each perspective . But it was a bit difficult to dissect what was going on in the begging so maybe just a little heads up or titles or 'Point of View ' in the first paragraphs .
Also , your writing style is really fluid and i like that but just a side suggestion , maybe you can define the dialogue a bit so it can be differed.
Other than that it was really good , I am looking forward to following this story .

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