dumd (Indigo)

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Pretty good, you should check it out

This seems like a great up and coming story! I'm very interested in what Luken has in store for us to manage his kingdom, though he certainly doesn't seem like a kind man right now I think there is plenty of character development in store for the future! A bit of proofreading might do this story good for general grammar and redundancies but overall I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work author!

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