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Grammar & Punctuation

Needs polishing and general work.

I can find and sense a lot of writing mistakes such as punctuation and grammar. You should work on improving word choice and writing, add in transition words and lengthen your sentences with detail. You should also identify the overall plot and characters, but hey, you do you!

I like the story itself so far, just be sure to work and tinker out those writing errors!

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