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Simple and pure

I enjoy poetry and your few poems here spoke to me. I could see what you were going after with each of them. The poems were simple yet deep with reason. You're an excellent poet.

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Magically enchanting

I enjoyed reading this. The magic, the special unique language, the creatures. All of it. It's even better than Harry Potter. It was hard to stop reading this. I look forward to a sequel.

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Riveting

First off, it felt like a mix of superheros and secret spywork so that's a plus. Secondly, it could lead to more superhero/spy books if you put your mind to it. That being said however, there were a few things, might just be me, but a few things that could be fixed or changed. First off, I'm all for details but some of the details, like bathroom scenes, could be minimized. I also know training scenes are important but maybe not focus so many of the same detailed writing for each one.
I did get a feel that some of this was inspired by Hinduism. I'm a little rusty in my Hinduism and gods literature but isn't Vritras a Hindu god in mythology? I liked how you kept it spread all over the world instead of just focusing on just one area.

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A brand new twist on Fairytales

First off, loved this story. The way you blended fairytales and legends together to make new stories. I really hope there will be sequels to this. I really want to see Maleficent coming back and helping Echo and Amber save their world. Especially from the Alpha. That alone would be a great sequel. I love how you ended it on a cliffhanger.

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Needs better closure

First off, I really hate to start with changes that I feel should be noted but the first change I suggest is to make Rosie 17 or at least 18. Sorry but having a 16 year old girl with a 30 something year old man is a bit disturbing. Maybe change Sid's age to something younger if he is a starting drug dealer. Especially since he's abusive and no one is questioning it. I understand that he is a drug dealing criminal but to leave him out there on the loose doesn't give the prospect of a happy ending for Rosie. And you've left it on such a good cliffhanger. Where is Mario? He needs to come back cause he's the first healthy relationship Rosie has had that was a guy.

Anyways, I did enjoy the story being in the criminal underworld with all the lies and deception that Rosie and Sid did everywhere. I also liked how Rosie would irk Sid on purpose just because she could. One thing I would change for sure is the ending where Mario comes back and there's something on the news about Sid being arrested or killed doing a drug deal. Rosie deserves a happy ending given everything that has happened to her.

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Great mix of supernatural and modern world

First off, great mix of a supernatural and modern day story. Loved the ideas of the different gods of different supernatural shapeshifters working together and some of their creations against it. One thing that might help is at the beginning explain it's in a modern day world and the whole voice in their heads.

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Great Mystery

Loved the book and each chapter. Definitely has the great work to be the first book of a series. I'm curious about the four being season related and what that all is about.

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Love It!

The way the story is written captures the real life situation of young people today. There's always that one person who is afraid to tell the other how they really feel because they don't want to ruin their friendship and encourage the one they love to be with whoever they're crushing on. The ending was so happy. I definitely can see this becoming a larger novel.

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New Point Of View

Really good story. Changes the whole perspective of fishing. Makes one sympathize with the fish when it comes to fishing. Really great story. Can't wait to read more of your work!

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Great Suspense

I really enjoyed reading this. Having it all from the one perspective made it very interesting and suspenseful. The ending was a very big twist. Well written.

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Romantic

I enjoyed reading this. It was quite an interesting romance story. Not too much and yet not too little with the words. It was still good.

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Good Werewolf Story

I enjoyed reading this. Werewolf schools with young werewolves is quite a read. That being said, I sort of feel like the battle scene could have had more instead of just a couple of paragraphs. Besides that, it was good.

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Love Story

I really enjoyed reading this. I just wish that there had been a bit more about the subplot with Juliet like an explanation scene about what happened between her and Matt after Belle had left. Besides that, it was really good.

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A brand new fairy tale

I really enjoyed reading this. It was hard to stop reading it and it kept one wanting to read more and more. This story is like the classic fairy tales. Especially the ending where good wins and evil loses. My favorite character was the wizard.

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Siren indeed

I have really enjoyed reading this even if the story isn't completed. I really wish there was more to this. The way it ended leaves the reader with a cliffhanger. I look forward to the next book.

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Dragon Perfection

I enjoyed this story. The flow, the surprises and the turns it took. It was hard to stop reading it.

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Truly Powerful

I'm not gonna lie, the last couple of chapters were the most emotional tear bringers. Especially when the reader learns who the letters at the end of each chapter are from. Your story was powerful and has a serious message in it. That racism still exists and that racist people will always defend themselves and their actions by twisting others into their defense. One thing I might suggest is that we get a confrontational scene between Markus and Skye. Seriously, Markus got off way too easily. Besides that, it was a great and powerful story.

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Twisted and Dark Surprises

Wow. The last chapter just totally changed the reader's thoughts about the first few chapters. That was a twist I did not see coming while reading this. Dark Angel is a very good nickname for Elizabeth. Five Stars out of Five Stars!

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Excellent Ghost Story

I enjoyed this story even if it was short. It does have potential and promise to be something even more. It was a little confusing to follow but it was still good. Excellent work.

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Magical Perfection

Once again, a great magical story. The flow and the surprises were well done.

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Best Werewolf Story Ever!!!!!

The twists, the turns, the surprises! This story of werewolf packs was perfect. It was impossible to stop reading it. Each chapter left the reader wanting more. The villains, the heroes. This story had it all.

A few tiny itsy bitsy change I might suggest. Definitely saw a few spelling errors and I think a few missing words or the wrong word for certain area. The only other thing I suggest could be worked on is tone down the little kid's talk about sex. She's a five years old.

Besides that, this was a perfect story.

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Great Fairy Tale

I didn't realize I was supposed to read this book before your other one but it was still good. Especially since, knowing how their story ended, it was fun seeing how it all really began.

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A Fairy Tale

It was like LOTR mixed with Spiderwick Chronicles mixed with King Arthur. I enjoyed reading it and following all of their adventures. It was so romantic and adventurous. Your story was hard to stop reading.

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Perfectly Crafted Ending

It was a great story and perfectly written to end Rick Riordan's book series even if he doesn't use this type of ending.

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True Love perfection

I enjoyed reading this. Sure it was short but it was focused on the two main characters and the love they had for each other. I'm really happy they had their happy ending. I can easily see this becoming a very big story with more details and more adventures for the two of them before they reach their new home.

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Looking towards the next book

First off, despite being very short, I found it to be quite entrancing and enjoyable to read. I think three chapters can be made into even more chapters since there's quite a bit that seems to be missing but that's just my opinion. I can't wait to read more of this.

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Excellent Romance Story

For it being so short, it was a good romance story. I love the type of stories where they meet after years since they last met. I could definitely see this story becoming more. Don't give up and keep up the good work!

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Cursed Fire

First off, loved the idea of a cursed fire not killing you right away. Secondly, thank you for the mention. Looking forward to reading more.

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Poor Cheddar!

Poor kitty. At least he isn't suffering anymore. I feel bad for his owner though.

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Excellent wolf story

Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. I still can't believe the goddesses screwed up match making. I'm interested in whether or not there will be a sequel. It doesn't sound like Damien will give up so easily.

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A Poet Unto Herself

Amazing poems. I can see the passion behind each one.

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Yay for Mom Saver

I really enjoyed this story. Thank goodness for the mother paying for the kitty to get better.

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Adorable Cheddar

I really enjoyed this story and it sounds about right for a new pet kitty.

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Interesting

Interesting story. I think that this story is a good story that can be expanded

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Quite a journey

Really loved how the story went for Tedi and Jack. The complexity of their love story and how they kept having to deal with other people. One thing I would change though is maybe add more to the ending instead of doing a quick wrap up ending. Besides that, it was good.

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Interesting but short and quick to the point

Very tricky and sneaky. Not gonna spoil this but the author is very quick to get to the main point of this book. If you want a book with a twist, this is it

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Purely True Love

I really enjoyed this story. Two friends finally getting together after everyone knows they're in love with a jealous ex around really makes it more exciting. That being said, one thing I would add to this is maybe more of a confrontation with Derrick. Besides that, maybe not do many time skips. This was very good though.

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Great Fanfiction

I do love Legos and the Lego movies so of course this was really good. Your writing with ways to make it clear who was talking was very good. I would just recommend that you would replace the initials for each character when they speak with their names. Besides that, it was an excellent piece. Does bring up the question of when there will be Lego figures of gods.

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SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

First off, the ending to this demands a sequel! Seriously. It needs a sequel. The ending didn't give the justice that Cameron, Roxy and Olivia needs. Vincent needs to be thrown into jail for his crimes for what he did. Cameron was just defending his sister and Olivia.

Secondly, Olivia needs the chance to face her parents and get out from under their controlling grip.

I loved this book! I can't wait for the sequel!

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True Love indeed

I loved this story! The way that the two of them were sending each other love letters. They seem like they have True Love. The way they fell in love and then got married five years later. They're so cute together!

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Excellent story!

Impossible to stop reading this. Each chapter left you hanging off the edge of your seat wanting to know more and what happened next. Please let there be a second book soon!

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Excellent plot hole filling

Writing the story from a different main character's main point of view was a terrific idea. It gave the reader more of a inside scoop on the story and just what all is happening in the world the author has created. The hero in this book and the same villain having more history then what was revealed in the other two books made it feel more real.

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Terrific Sequel

The second book is always better than the first one and here it's very true. Amazing how the Dark Being got revenge on the entire village with his fearsome monsters. These books have great potential to be bigger and more detailed. Keep up the great work.

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Epic and gripping.

Loved the plotline and the moral of the story. Overcoming one's pride and being brave enough to know that you don't always need to do things on your own to prove a point. I can't wait to read the next story. Those monsters sound creative and dangerous.

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Tearful but good.

This was such an emotional story. The lost of a friend can be hard to get through. You did such an amazing job touching the emotions and how Addie was coping with the lost of her friend.. It was good that you waited until towards the end to reveal exactly how Addie's friend was killed. However I would suggest you might make a few chapters around the court hearing where the fate of the killer is decided and have the girlfriend there with Addie since they knew the victim best. Besides that, well written.

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Great Vampire Story

First off, loved the story. The way you wrote what sounds like the very first vampires as guys who can easily live in the present without too much trouble is quite impressive. I really enjoyed the love plot between two damaged souls coming together and being exactly what each other needed. These kind of love stories are some of my favorite. However, I felt like we didn't get enough of the Zs. Maybe have a bit more of a climatic scene between them and the vampires with Sam caught up between them. Either way, it was a really great story!.

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True Love Found

I loved the story. It might have been short but it was to the point and that was so sweet. I'm sure he loved seeing how you wrote this. It can't be easy writing about personal experiences, especially when it comes to personal love, for others to read about but you did a terrific job about it. I'm happy for you two. This story was perfect.

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Great story!

I enjoyed every chapter! The dating went from online to real life was a great idea. I loved the twist about them meeting at the coffee shop and not realizing who they were. The ups and downs were great. Nolan and Michelle were great at trying to break up the two and acting so discreetly about it. I enjoyed this. One thing that might be a good idea is having Jacob and Nikki confronting Michelle and Nolan in a chapter. Besieds that, it's perfect.

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Perfectly eerie and mysterious

Reading this story reminded me so much of the Twilight Zone. I can't wait to read the second book to see what happens next. The characters were perfect and there were times I felt how Nessa felt.

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Perfectly Suspenseful

It is a really suspenseful. Edgar Allen Poe himself would be proud of the suspense. It reminded me of his works, especially Tell Tale Heart where it's from just the one perspective the whole time. That being said, one thing I would suggest is maybe put a divider between the two scenes so we know exactly when she's in the past and when she's in the present. The way it ended as well was sort of somewhere between too suspenseful and "is that it?" What happened to the old man? Was it her that killed them? Maybe go a bit deeper into that part. Above all, really great work.

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Excellent Poem

I really enjoyed reading your poem. The flow and the rhythm were excellent. It gives one the idea of what it's like to become a parent. The imagery was excellent.

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Great Book!

I enjoyed reading every word of this story and the flow of it! Clara is such a heroic character and that her twin sister would be sort of the villain of the piece. It was also a good idea having so many of the characters working with her to have magic in a kingdom were magic is outlawed. It's like a very big twist on The Prince and the Pauper but with more and a possible sequel. That being said, one thing I would suggest is having Clara use her magical abilities more. I feel like everyone else was using theirs and she wasn't after she ended up in the castle. Maybe in the second book, if there is one, have Clara dive more into her own magic. Overall, a very good story.

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Interesting To Say The Least

So there were good parts of the story such as Jess having two different boys in her life and a possible rival. Sounded like a good teenage story. However, it was hard to follow along at times. The quotation marks weren't in the right place so it was hard to tell who was saying what at certain times. It was also a little confusing. A few details that might have been important to know where either missing or not present. It is a good story. Just needs a little work on it. It has great potential and it was good.

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Perfect Love Story!

First off, loved the plot. Two teenagers who are in love with each other having the hardest time being together because of outside forces getting in the way. Secondly, I loved how clear it was. Willow and Cole having the hardest time starting their relationship. I'm looking forward to the next book. One thing though I would recommend changing would be maybe giving a chapter or two to Erin's perspective. I know it's about Willow and Cole but Erin is just a big of a character as Willow and Cole. Besides that, it's amazing and good.

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Loved it!

I first started reading this on Wattpad after someone recommended it to me. Loved reading it there and was always waiting for the next chapter. You're very detailed with everything. From the characters to the settings. You are very good at romance stories. This is one of my favorite romance stories because of how they met and how they got started. I can't wait to continue reading it.

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Excellent and Gripping

Enjoyed every chapter of this. It's full of adventure, suspense and keeps the reader guessing just like Dialla. Really love this book. It's everything I look for in a magical fantasy book. Planning on reading the second book soon!

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