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Eye catching

This is amazingly written and when I read it, I felt shivers because the words felt so real, so true and deep. I felt like the words were washing around me. I love the descriptions and tone, the FLOW of your poems is so smooth, like the words just seemed to click into place. I find that when you read someone's poem, it's like it took the author a few minutes to write when in reality it cost them so much pain and time. These poems poke to me!

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Love In A Thousand Pieces

From the first chapter the story drew me in. I wanted to know what was going to happen, and I got more than I expected. I thought this would be a short, sweet read about two people falling in love, but couldn't b together, but you did not disappoint. Definetely not.
One of the things I loved about this book was the detail put into every word, paragraph, and chapter. It must've been hard to convert the role play to a story, but you did it perfectly! The thorough features of the characters, the responses molded to fit who the character was.
The writing style is very well written, making it easy to read and even easier to understand. The events are intriguing and makes me want to read more to find out what happens.
I can't wait to read wat happens next!

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New Love

This is a pretty hooking story, and it definitely has potential, although it has lots of grammar/spelling/punctuation mistakes. As well as the sentence "I sigh out of sadness" appears too often, so maybe you could cut that out and add other actions that show sadness. It's pretty hard to understand what's happening, so a more clearer storyline would make it great. But overall, I think that this is a good story, especially if you develop it more, because I really like the idea of a Dramione fanfiction.

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Stars!

This is pretty good, I loved the story. It's funny, and I was surprised to see someone else that read Star Darlings, even if it was when they were younger. Although there are a few grammar/punctuation mistakes, I understood it just fine, so it's not urgent to fix.

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Really good story

This is such a good story. I loved the fight scenes, it shows how strong Alexus is. I also like how you talk about his background through the story instead of directly saying it. Even though there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, I can understand it perfectly and I would recommend it to anyone who wants a good short read.

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Shards of Ice and Frost

I love this style of writing, the poetic words. Even though I didn't quite understand the plot and what was happening, I really loved it and want to read more. The only thing I would recommend to change about is make it a little clearer to read.
Overall, I loved this story so far!

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Love it!

Wow. This is so well written, and I love the story's plot, how you make the events transition so well. The characters are cool, but I wish there was more of the story so I could see more of them. Please post more of it, I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Very profound!

Wow, I feel like I was experiencing what the poems were talking about, the heartbreak and longing. I'm a hopeless romantic so anything remotely lovey goes on my to read mental list. But since I don't HAVE an exiting love life, I can only imagine.
I feel like you knew exactly what words to use while writing this, even though it's difficult to find the right words when you're writing, trust me, all of us here on Inkitt know that.
Honestly, I didn't find any mistakes in this delightful poem book! Here and there something is just a little harder to understand, but just a little, and it clears up after I reread the line.
Keep writing fantastic poetry!

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Heart wrenching

I just...I can't. I don't have any words. I love your writing so much, I've even reread and re-reread your books and I can't do that with very many because I know what's going to happen. But with your writing, I feel like each and every word is unexpected and a surprise, totally in a good way. You made me cry. Again and again and again. Plus laugh, ache for the characters that I have grown so emotionally attached to, and scream. Internally, of course. I'm usually reading on Inkitt after my family went to sleep so I have to be quiet, lol. Anyway, yours are some the best books I have read on here and I thank you so much for writing them and making my heart warm. You might have saved my life, in a way.

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Gendered review

First things first, I loved how this story started, although of course not the situation itself, but because it just presents the problem and the main character. This is very good quick read of you're looking for something to just sit cozily with. Although there are minor and not very much spelling grammar mistakes, I get the drift of the story pretty well and enjoyed reading about Desi.

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The way the world ends

...I don't even know what to say to this. Thoughtful, frustrating, but at the same time sorrowful and absolutely adorable. Indigo's and Nate's battles are so alike I can't help but wonder why they didn't meet earlier. I am so glad I read this jewel of a book!

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Overall amazing

the characters, the plot, a shoe it transitioned so smoothly...just wow. This story broke my heart and sewed it back together again. The girls were made fir each other, there's not other explanation fir the chemistry between them. This might be my favorite book here on Inkitt.

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The Curious Girl

I've never read a femHarry but now that I have I really love it! Elizabeth has a different approach and outlook in life, very different from Harry, partly because she is a girl, and that gives a whole different view on the situation. The story transitions nicely, and I like the twists you added that weren't in the original books, like Elizabeth going with Professor McGonagall instead of staying with the Dursleys-- which I really appreciated. I am so glad that Elizabeth eased to her friends and new people in her life!

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Defining Happiness

The first thing that caught my attention is that these chapters seem to be from different people, and I loved reading their responses, and relating to ten. It made me, and I hope other people who read this awesome book, feel like we're not alone in this. Like there's a whole other world out there who we can sympathize and relate to, as well as support. Which there is! The words in these chapters are wholesome and beyond true , and it really feels like it's not defining the meaning of life, but how you can find yours. I definetely recommend this book to anyone needs motivation right now, or just anyone who needs it.!

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Being Different #1

I love the style of how you wrote, the style of how the story is going. Characters, settings, and situations are all describes very neatly and in a great manner, letting me understand it perfectly. I'm so glad that there's a whole series of these. I love reading about Anne, and how you integrate her difficulties with her differences and the magic of the Wizarding World together, plus friendship, and the overall harry Potter element, which is what brings this story together so magically. ;)
I am very much looking forward to reading all of Anne's adventures!

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Texting Him

First of all, let me say that this book was both emotional and intriguing. The first chapter drew me in because if the different format instead of the average book, a narrative, and promised that this book would be like no other, and it kept its promise. I love it when books seemingly talk to you, tell you a story and amoral, instead of just getting a point across.
Second, the longer chapters in the narrative style lets me see what life is like for the characters outside their text messages, including the alternating point of views. The different details to describe each and every character, feature, sound, you name it- you describe it perfectly.
Another thing is p, of course, the story itself. It made my cry, laugh, and wish it would never end at the sane time. The emotion, the intensity of it all-just wow. I'm amazed. You must've had loads of practice and taken to write this piece of amazing art.
Thank you for writing it, and sharing your story.

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How Remus Met Marlene

Something I love about this story is that it's like, behind the scenes of the harry Potter books. Instead of a fanfiction about Harry or another character his age/his sibling, it happens before Harry was even born. I love that.
Another thing I like about this story is the f l o w of it, and how it seems like it runs smoothly, without any bumps. I think I have that problem in my writing, that the storyline doesn't transition very well, but in your writing I can clearly see that, and it affects the story positively.
I also like the character's enthusiasm, their magic that matches their nature in the books. You capture their energy and shape it into something that fits with your story, yet still manages to stay within J. K. Rowling's character design.
Overall, this book was one of it kind and made me want to read more, drawing me in with the first chapter's title and especially the books title itself.
I'm glad I read this book!

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be

I like the plot of this story, and the story itself, but the grammar sometimes makes it hard to understand. A way you could improve the story is to focus on grammar more, and maybe adding more details. I also like that you use a a variety of words and not use the same one again and again, like I've seen in some other stories. Overall, this is a great story and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your writing!

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Because of the Beast

This is.... no words. Just, wow. The story drew me in, and I love how you personified the girl's thoughts as a beats, When I read it , I felt kind of scared, like it was happening to me, and I hoped the girl was going to make it. Your writing is fantastic, and I can't wait to se more of your writing in the future!

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Love these poems!

I love the different words being used, at the same time that they rhyme they also give meaning to the poem, and even though there aren't too many words being used it conveys lots of emotion and makes me think. The poems are very motivational and encouraging, and might even show someone in a point of trouble or finding themselves what they can look towards. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there, but it doesn't really matter, because a poem can look however you want it to be however many mistakes it has, as long as the readers can understand it.
The choice of words and how you structured the poems makes it easy to read as well as hard to understand, but that's understandable because everything has a deeper meaning than what's said, and with poems like these I like to dive into the words and figure out the real meaning of them.
I think this collection of poems has real potential to become something more, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your poems! Keep writing!

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I fell in love with this book

This is really great. I love the characters, especially Emma, and how much she grows out of her shell since the beginning. From the first chapter I was drawn in because of the different themes, characters, and personalities. This book has amazing potential, but one thing I want to point out is the now-and-then grammar mistakes, but I feel like if I can understood it fine then you don't have to fix that, but it might make it easier to read.
Something I really love abut this book is all the different elements of the story. I love how you put in themes about autism, LGBTQ+, AND fantasy, as well as having an orphan in the story which makes their past more interesting. That makes it one of my favorite types of books.

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Intriguing and satisfying

Wow, this is really good. I love the different point of views, showing me into each character's heads and reminding me that there's more than one side to a story. Although there are a few mistakes, I can understand it well and there isn't too much need to fix those grammar/spelling mistakes. I can't wait for the next part!

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Depression review

This is written really well, and I can really understand the grammar and what's happening. I love how you could insert a moving story into one chapter, and a short one, and still it's a complete story that is touching.

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Book of Ravens

Wow, this is.... no words. Intriguing and mystifying. The word play, rhyming, it all just clicks together to make something beautiful. I loved this! Keep writing amazing poetry like this!

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The Girl Who Smiles

Very motivating, I felt like I was inside the poem. I loved the words and the feelings behind them, and the title of the poem too, it made me wonder what it was about.

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...emotional

This was very emotional. A little fast-paced, but I would definitely love to see more of it. There a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there, but I can understand it fine. A tip would be to add some more detail, or describing things more at length. However, keep writing!

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Emotional and intriguing

I love this story so far. It really got me sucked in, and I want to know more about what happens. Even though I don't have the same perspective as Ryden I feel like I can relate to him. The plot is pretty good, it shows how David is feeling about the note Ryden gives him and how he reacts, as well as how Ryden himself feels about the situation. I also like how the story gives an insight to his mind and what he's thinking. Please keep writing it!

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Psychic Review

This is so good so far. Even in the first chapter I was drawn in because of the plot and characters and what they can do. I was a little confused about the plot, maybe you could clear the story up a little by adding some more details about the characters' backstories. Overall, I think this story deserves to be published. Keep writing, Eryn

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