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Hello! Glad you clicked on. I'm a beginner looking to learn . So, just a 16 year old with some free time

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First few chapters

So, I finished the first few chapters. Your writing style is interesting and I'm sure many people will like it. It's easy to understand but it's just not my cup of tea. The plot is also something I, on a personal level, am not attracted to mainly because I have other preferences. Grammar and punctuation could be worked on, I think if you spell check certain things twice it'll be fine. Your story is interesting and emotional so I will recommend it :)

Keep going and good luck with your future works!

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Can't wait for more

The story is very captivating. Good job! 😉😆

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Okay-ish

The story seems very personal, like it is the diary of the author. In my opinion, the story is quite rushed so all the painful/sad scenes lose that impact they should have on the reader. We can't really get to know our main character because her personality is indiscernible. We just know her life is miserable.
I'd suggest lengthier descriptions and some more character development.

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