effigor

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Zoi

I love poetry, this is well written and fantastic. Great job!

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The Trust Labyrith

The first paragraph drew me in and I loved the attention to detail.

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Tell Me You Love Me

I liked the idea of the story, but I have one suggestion. Maybe you should kick the story off by River exploding at her parents, then dive into the details of the divorce. An excited reaction at the beginning of a story always draws me in.

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