eleeyanna

An alien vampire writer who's afraid of blood.

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GOOD JOB

Common ng plot but it is really likeable. Kulang lang ng konting push sa show, don't rule. At pati ang dialogue and action tag.

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Good choice of scenes

Good choice of scenes!
Kailangan na lang ng identical writing voice. More research about the topic. Don't use too much emotions when describing it. Especially when it comes to clinical disorders, such as depression.

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