This book is really nice and smoothly written. It is promising at gives you the required fun you need while reading.
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I first got confused reading the prologue, but then hey they are written only give an element of mystery and confusion. But the further I read it got more clearer. I liked the part where the characters were introduced it really caught my attention. The blurb was not so clear but it doesn't matter much.
I would say you really know how to write in first person point if view. I would say the the title didn't catch my attention so much because I couldn't understand what it ment but It's your choice.
Over all I like this book and hope you continue to give us more of such awesome chapters.
P.S: my first language is not english so if there is any mistake I apologize for it.