Great so far!
Writing the review as I am reading each chapter. By the way, I really like the cover on this one haha. It's definitely the type for an erotic novel. In the comments I'll put the specific details I want you, the author, to note, but I believe that this is a great start, but detail needs to be expanded on, especially with the genre at hand. Trust me, I've written maybe 4 in my time writting, haha, Definitely a read for a casual reader, someone not looking for anything overbearing or super long since the point is made simply and clearly. Suggestions and thoughts in the comments.
Read the story now
I'll be watching for updates so I can fix my review if needed. :)