Eletha Gilcyne

3 Prologues?

I have to mention this, but a book will more often that not fail if it has a prologue. And 3? That's almost obsessive. Just make them chapters or put them all into 1 prologue. Sorry, I had to get that out. That aside, I enjoy the idea and it seems to be decently executed so far. I'm looking forward to the rest of the novel! A few errors here and there, but I go to public school, I'm used to that, haha. Sorry.

A few edits, maybe some rearrangement, overall pretty good.

Great Read for a Non-Fan

I'm not a Scifi person, so I read this with a few grains of salt, but I can say that I did enjoy it greatly! I love the humor, every book has its hints of humor. And I love the idea and the plot, it's just an interesting way to spend the weekend, haha. I love who it ended, I don't want to spoil much of anything so Imma be vague~

It was great! Even for someone who isn't much of a fan in the genre,

Great so far!

Writing the review as I am reading each chapter. By the way, I really like the cover on this one haha. It's definitely the type for an erotic novel. In the comments I'll put the specific details I want you, the author, to note, but I believe that this is a great start, but detail needs to be expanded on, especially with the genre at hand. Trust me, I've written maybe 4 in my time writting, haha, Definitely a read for a casual reader, someone not looking for anything overbearing or super long since the point is made simply and clearly. Suggestions and thoughts in the comments.

I'll be watching for updates so I can fix my review if needed. :)

Pretty Good

I don't personally suffer from anything, sorry I can't relate there, but it's a realistically gripping novel. There are a few technical things that got on my nerves, but I tried to push most of that off. Just go back over and tidy that up a little. Other than that, it's a decent read and I would suggest it to any friends that would relate.

Poems

I'm not too partial on poetry, but I'll try to review this on the basis that I can help with. The chapter names are a little odd but I assume that was on purpose. The prose is written nicely and the poems themselves are nice. Beyond the aesthetics, there isn't much I can help with. They're nice to read when you don't have anything else. Sorry I couldn't be any more help.

So Far

Since the story isn't done yet, I can't give a full score, but I believe the plot is very interesting so far. You know a great deal about African Wildlife and hunting habits of poachers. My tips to you are as follows. When describing things, if you notice the same word being used in multiple sentences (I.E grass, lion) try to use another noun. If that's too difficult, I understand. I encounter the same problem sometimes! When you were describing the rhino scene in the prologue, it was very interesting to see it from the child rhino's perspective. But I read that having a prologue in your book will make it very hard right off the bat to get it published. You could easily call the prologue the first chapter and so on and so forth. It's all up to what you decide to do though! It was an interesting concept so far, I can't wait to read more.