ElijahHeartilly

Hey :) I love romance and erotica with dominance/BDSM. My stories are nothing special but I dream of someone enjoying them as much as I love to write them :)

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I loved it until...

I really loved reading this story! It was great and just made you want to continue reading. I sadly couldn't read it to the end because I got too annoyed at the female protagonist after a certain event happend. I continued reading the following few chapters but couldn't get myself to read until the end, she just annoyed me too much with her sudden issues, even though she knew from the beginning who he is and what he does for a living.

I still would recommend the story, even though I didn't finish it! The time reading it was totally worth it and you should totally read it if you're into bossy but sweet mafia men! 😊❤️

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Cute and steamy short story

It's a nice and cute story and I think it's just perfect length to have a quick and nice read!
Thanks for writing this story, I loved every second of reading it! 😊❤

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