Elise Orleans

Manchester

Writing is a wonderful world I love to disappear into whenever I can. It's a great privilege to share this world with people who love it too

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Mesmerizing Plot

To really enjoy this story, you have to sit back and allow yourself to be socked; no hurry. Once you do, you'd realize what a clever plot it has. I really enjoyed. If you're the type who likes to take reading slow, this is the best read for you

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Thumb Up For it

This writer captures a hospital scene so well it's captivating. We are waiting for update to know how the story builds but I have no doubt, from where she has gotten so far, it will be an excellent piece altogether. Keep up the good work, CL.

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Couldn't Stop Reading

This is rare piece. You touch it and you simply want to read to the end. I absolutely love it.

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An Excellent Piece

I really enjoyed it. It has explicit first chapters that helps you see ahead and still raises enough questions to make you hooked. My only prayer is for her Hunter not to be a forbidden love (because of blood ties). That'd be tragic. Shonihn did her best to capture emotions into her narrations. You can actually picture and feel what was happening. It's a good work done, Shonihn.

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GIVE IT A TRY

It's a work of art. The writer has a wild imagination and that has been beautifully crafted in this read. It's absolutely fabulous. Thumb up, girl. Nurture that talent well.

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An Interesting Piece

So far one of the best creative writings I have read online. I love the slow way the story unfolds. You paint a clear picture for the mind and the style grips the reader's interest and holds it. Keep it up, Lavnya. You're a rare talent. My little advise is to pay attention to the gramma and punctuations.

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