Very different from the norm. It was refreshingly original. There were very minor redundancies, repetitiveness, and both overuse and underuse of punctuation, but it was not hard to follow along and understand despite the fact. Some characters, I believe, deserve to be developed a little more, but they’re not impacting characters and the story could do with or without, really. All, which with a little revision wont fix. (Huhuhu, I’m going on about overuse of punctuation and I’m writing a bunch of run-ons.) A unique voice with a blindsiding plot twist. Will have you questioning even the main protagonist! A heartwarming ending that’ll have you blaming allergies. Keep up the good work!
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