E. N. Bounds

Bakersville, NC

Full time Internet Manager, part time Real Estate Photographer, and a Writer forever! Nestled in a town with NO traffic lights in the Appalachian Mountains.

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Better Than I Anticipated

A little bit of an emotional rollercoaster. Not a fan of love triangles (or squares lol) but I guess she was a teenager and we all had a few crushes. Subtle hints lead up to a blindsiding climax and grippingly executed. Needs some work, some chapters were choppier than others, but the flows were great. Looking forward to part II

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Gripping and Suspenseful!

Once you start reading, it’s hard to pry yourself away! I reluctantly did pull myself away due to a few hiccups in my own life. But once I picked it up again, I had to finish it! The events slowly unravel and would be a page turner for sure.

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Riveting

Very different from the norm. It was refreshingly original. There were very minor redundancies, repetitiveness, and both overuse and underuse of punctuation, but it was not hard to follow along and understand despite the fact. Some characters, I believe, deserve to be developed a little more, but they’re not impacting characters and the story could do with or without, really. All, which with a little revision wont fix. (Huhuhu, I’m going on about overuse of punctuation and I’m writing a bunch of run-ons.) A unique voice with a blindsiding plot twist. Will have you questioning even the main protagonist! A heartwarming ending that’ll have you blaming allergies. Keep up the good work!

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