Elizabeth Jacobs

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Very interesting and well written!

I love the world that the author has built. It is incredibly well described and you get a good sense of all the characters. The chapters are quite long, but the story develops at a nice pace and as a reader you are really drawn into concept, so it's worth your time. I didn't notice any annoying writing mistakes and the switching of the POV was clear. In other stories it's sometimes difficult to keep up, but here I barely had that problem. It helps that the characters have a distinct feel and style. I definitely recommend this story to fans of the fantasy genre!!

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