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I'm a new author looking to share her stories.

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Rival Gangs

Ok so the plot is a good one, but you do have work to do to get your thoughts across properly. I noticed you labeling the 'next day' or something along those lines. You want to incorporate the shift in time into your paragraphs as this is a novel not a script. Anyway you have your idea down, but I saw misuse words and some grammar errors. Overall, I thought this story was ok..

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A Potential Suitor

A Potential Suitor was a good read. It was light in a sense, but I felt like more of the darker stuff could have been heightened to add to the rollercoaster of emotions between the two, like the death and abuse. Amelia and Blake were definitely an interesting couple. I did feel that his inner struggle with a relationship and Elise was lacking. It wasn't fully shown, in my opinion, how he came to terms with his struggles. Anyway, the story was one that was enjoyable.

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On Your Knees

On Your Knees was a quick read. The storyline was really good, but I felt like there could be more done with it. I actually wanted to see the story developed more into a longer piece. I was definitely curious about how the lycans came to be. Aiden is the strongest, but how? He was able to command the other lycans without a word. Then Elle, how had her mother came to be with a man like Rhett? Anyway, this was a quick read. It was enjoyable too.

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Beta Stone

Beta Stone is a cute little story. I loved the overall story idea. I did wished Karen could have done something about that worry Kennedy I think though. I was sure she would had made a reappearance and started trouble. Anyway, I loved Stone cute personality. It was refreshing. Karen's family was fun and funny. Cynthia was a favorite. Overall it was worth the read.

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The Myth of Despair

The Myth of Despair was a sweeter story compared to the other two books. It kept me laughing and Blaze and Hope wmstory was a good one. I'm glad to have read it.

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The Tale of Pride

The Tale of Pride was so much fun!!!! Sol really is to much. I'm glad that he got his happy ever after. I'm glad that Arabella got hers as well. Some of the author's other characters are a bit disturbing like Envy and Gluttony. But they were used nicely to bring Sol and Arabella together. Like the first of this series, this was a great read. So creative. I enjoyed it. I love the touch of incorporating the title into the story as if they themselves had written their own story. ^__^ I look forward to the next book.

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The Legend of Wrarh

The Legend of Wrath was very enjoyable. I've been fishing through Inkitt for werewolf stories and came across this one after I had started reading the author's book, Beta Stone. I did stop that book just to read this one and it drew me in quickly. The story is very good. Very creative too. I loved Wrath and Artemis's story. Sol was a favorite o'course. ^__^ Anyway this story was a nice tug or war romance that had me reading it with two days. I'm intrigued to read the other books. The characters were complex. I loved Luna's intervention, but I was glad that she took a backseat. I wonder what the council will do now that the girls were born. It felt like they were against her reproducing in the first place. I'm also wondering about Josh too even though he only had a small part. Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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