ellenfairyblue

I'm a new author looking to share her stories.

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Rival Gangs

Ok so the plot is a good one, but you do have work to do to get your thoughts across properly. I noticed you labeling the 'next day' or something along those lines. You want to incorporate the shift in time into your paragraphs as this is a novel not a script. Anyway you have your idea down, but I saw misuse words and some grammar errors. Overall, I thought this story was ok..

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