Ellie_Masterpiece

Mahe, Seychelles

Name: Elsia Francoise Age: 18 Occupation: Student Hobbies: Reading, writing, drawing, going to the beach, charity work

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The Court of Love

I love the use of carefully written descriptions as well as the plot so far. Keep it up! This story is very promising.

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Find Me in Beast World

WOW! This story is amazing. I wasn't sure whether or not I would like it but I do. The plot is really interesting and writing style keeps readers craving for more.

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Stefan's Diaries

Although there are a few grammar mistakes here and there, the plot is very interesting. Make sure that you part paragraphs into two when they get too long. But keep up the good work. You're on to something there.

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The Bad Boy and The Angel: Constructive Criticism

Although there is an inconsistency in the implementation of punctuation, grammar and sentence structure, the story is really good! Having read the story from beginning to end, the only other area that needs to be fixed is the length of paragraphs. Note that shorter paragraphs are like teasers. They keep readers yearning for more as they jump from paragraph to paragraph. Like stepping stones. Now to the part where I congratulate the author. You are extremely talented when it comes to keeping readers hooked. The amount of details put into the descriptions pull readers inside the story. As if we ourselves are invisible and inaudible onlookers to the unfolding of events. So there is good use of images and imagery. The utilization of characterization is well done. Each character has their own unique traits which helps readers distinguish them. Furthermore, the plot structure is fascinating, as it contains elements of romance as well as mystery. Good job!

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