Elsabella

An erotic, gaming adventure!

This is a charming, fast-paced novel that will appeal to both fans of Minecraft and fans of erotica featuring non-humans.

The main character, Jenny, is likable, has a good sense of humor and is VERY open to new romantic adventures. We follow her along her erotic journey as she acquires a menagerie of pets and other Minecraft creatures that are also her lovers. Other aspects of Minecraft life are given plenty of attention in the book, such as building, exploring new worlds and potion-making.

Two things that might make the book a smoother read? 1) Shorter paragraphs are easier on the reader. 2) There are some “alternate” chapters that do not contribute to the main story. Rather than sticking them in the middle, maybe it would be best to put them at the end as bonus chapters.

All in all, an imaginative, spicy and explicitly fun novel that adds a new dimension to a popular game!

Amethyst of the Forest

This book so far is a quick and breezy read. The dialogue between the brothers is engaging and realistic, and it's easy to feel the relationship between them. Much of the description of the castle and natural surroundings is well done. The introduction, with the history and background of the story, is written with a poetic style.

I did feel some distance from the characters, as their emotions were "told" rather than "shown". It also seems like there are a lot of brothers, and it was quite tricky to tell who was who at times.

All in all, the story so far is a likeable beginning which holds strong promise for the reader.