Elvis

I like to write. My favorite genres are, fantasy, romance, sci-fi, thriller, and dystopian. I hope you like some of the things I may post on here. :)

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The alpha kings daughter

In the beginning I was a little skeptical about my reading this, I thought that Bella’s character was too unrealistic for her position, and I noticed a couple plot holes, but later on I could see that most of them were explained and Bella changed over time, actually fitting the title “Alpha Queen.” I read this book in a day and I don’t regret it, I was surprised at every turn of the book, I didn’t expect a lot of things to happen and that’s a good thing. Thank you for the hard work author :))

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Beloved

I think the authors writing is great, and I liked the story. But after reading the first book about Her parents, I was overjoyed and happy to have found a calm and peaceful story with a twinge of action and some drama to it, then I read this book and it honestly felt like a copy and pasted version of the first one but with slightly different characters with different back stories, I don’t know what the author was going for or if it was intentional. But I was a little disappointed that it wasn’t too different than the first book, I mean Sorsha and Bea were so alike it was crazy, and Elijah and Leo had similar problems that effected their relationships almost equally the same. I’m not trying to be overly critical or a hater, I’m just trying to understand lol. I can understand that the author may just enjoy writing stories of similar style and have that calm aura with the book, but I don’t know, I personally feel like if you want to make a series, the books probably shouldn’t be so similar that the reader doesn’t feel as pulled in as they did at the beginning of the journey. I could be the only one who feels this way and I might be overthinking it, but idk I’m just telling you why I rated it this way. I absolutely love your writing style tho and that the characters try to understand each other.

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Fix you

I love this so much. I read it all in one night, i love that it’s not as cliche as other stories I’ve read on here, and that Elijah and Sorsha get to work out their relationship emotionally. The only problem I really saw was a grammar mistake here and there, but with the quality of the story I could barely even notice them. This is amazing work and I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into it, can’t wait to read the next book :)))

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Worlds apart

I thought this story was so amazing and creative, I almost cried on multiple occasions and every turn of the story had me on my feet. I can’t wait to read More chapters if they come back :)

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Agent something

I thought that the book was a good idea, but the character was unrealistic, she was an agent but she thought like a ten year old, the phrases used and how she described everything made me think Of a pick me girl and not a professional woman. She said she was so experienced but she didn’t act like it. I think that your writing is better than others but it still needs a lot of work if you want to become a popular writer. Good job though.

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I forgot the name

I honestly have no words. I can’t describe how beautiful this was. It made me cry so much, I didn’t know if it would have a happy ending so I almost stopped reading because i was crying too much, but I decided to finish it and I don’t regret my decision. I don’t remember the last time I was so emotionally moved by a story. Your writing is beautiful, please keep writing stories, you have an amazing talent. :)))

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Love and Loss

This book was amazing! I couldn’t stop reading it. I loved the plot and the entire story altogether. I can tell that there was a lot of work put into this, and I am so glad I got to read it :)

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Vampire book

Bruh u have no idea how much I loved this book. Like I was so hooked that I read the whole thing in a day. I’m just about to read the second one. I really loved how the characters developed over time, especially their relationships. Nico and Khloe got closer, Xander became nicer, and Doe became friends with Khloe. Normally for a book like this I’d expect differently, (not in a bad way, just I’ve read books about vampires and most of them didn’t make sense lol) but this book went beyond my expectations and besides for a few grammar errors, it was great. I loved the plot and every detail added in, I can tell you put in a lot of work into this :)

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A love for the shadows

I loved this book, everything about it was great. I hope to find more books like these.

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Stepfather

I thought this book had great writing and editing... I just couldn’t agree with the story that well..

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The Twins

This story was great. I loved it and binge read it... it left me on my toes at every turn. There were things I disliked about it.... but in the end I was happy that they got together and were good again. I’m so glad that manipulative bish died. (Lol) I kinda really hated her. But anyways, the writing style was great and there were a few errors with grammar but it was all good.

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Asher

It was an okay book overall and I did get hooked in and ended up reading it in less than a day... I just feel like the character development could have been better, there were some grammar issues and the ending was a little rushed.

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The Bet

I loved this book so much, it hooked me from the start and I couldn’t stop reading. It gave me a rollercoaster of emotions and was overall great. I’ve read books kinda like this one before and they were super cliche but this one was different and way better.

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Loving Roman

This was an amazing book and I finished it in one day, I can’t wait to read the next one. The plot line is amazing, grammar good, writing overall good. I loved it. I loved how much detail was put into it and how great it pieced together. :)))

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Meeting Roman

I thought this was an amazing book and I loved reading it. <3

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