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Saoirse

Even though it's just one chapter right now, it's really good! I like how the main character is a lady pirate, rather than the stereotypical male. I can easily picture Marion in my head, and she's also got a cool name. There's a few spots where the language isn't as good as it probably could be, but it's still easily understood. I also like how, instead of being completely merciless like most pirates, Marion gave them a chance to live. Typically, I think of pirates as dudes who come, kill, then take what they want without a second thought. This is a nice difference.

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