EMHW_Bear

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Beautiful

I love this poetry. While not too complicated it is wonderfully heart felt.

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Great job!

Though you aren’t finished with this story, yet. It is a great start. I am eager to see how she heals. I already gave you some helpful tips in the comments. Keep up the good work. This has the makings of a great story.

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Great Job!

I haven’t read the entire story yet, but I am half through with it. I love the plot. It moved forward a little slow in the beginning for me, and the long paragraphs appear daunting. Also, you should cut down on -ly words for creative writing. But so far the progression is well done., so I am going to finish this. I just didn’t want to keep you waiting for the swap. Your ideas are amazing. Keep up the good work.!

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Black Out

Though there is only one chapter so far, I loved everything about this. I felt her frustration, anger, pain, and fear. Please continue. I cannot wait for more!

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Mutual Need

I love this story.

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Waking Up to Love

Although, not what I was expecting, this was a nice little read so far. Its only posted up to chapter 3, but I look forward to reading a few more chapters to see where the author takes me.

I wonder if I should wait for the story to be complete before I attempt to write a review, because the system forces the person to write more than 200 characters or you cannot post. it. But then, I may not otherwise write a review if it takes too long to be completed, and I wanted to let the author know that I have taken a look at this.

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