M.C. Rivera

Tampa

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Broken ties

Your idea is good but it's difficult to read. It is long winded and there are numerous grammar errors. IE: "More fresher, more clearer, more darker." the very first sentence. Long winded means the run-on sentences and details that don't help the story. Sometimes less is more.

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