EncryptedWriting

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Publisher Ready

So, this is not my type of book. It may not be for a lot of people as it is long and somewhat devious. The plot is really good, but it takes a very long time to set up. I feel like if you set up and bring up the goal/mission sooner, it would bring in more audiences. People want a goal, an action, and it feels like it takes a bit too long to establish that conflict. However, I can't critique anything else because the grammar is absolutely stellar, the voice/tone is amazing, and it overall is just a well-written story. Any publisher would have a field day since this story can be wielded into anything they want. Would for sure read another story of yours!

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Needs lots of work editing

You have a very interesting plot that can grab a lot of people's attention, but I find that the book is riddled with errors, and it personally is a very big off-set for me. I think you really need to clean up the mistakes and read it through the eyes of the audience. Only from then will you be able to really see the mistakes, also, read it through an audio book/converter. There are many free websites out there that would do so; that is how I find most of my mistakes.

Keep trying! You have a good story on your hands, just need to clean up.

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