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This story is interesting and a page turner that I just want to keep reading and can't wait for it to be finished. I can't wait to see what happens next and where the story leads. Definitely keep writing.

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From start to finish, this book kept my attention. William is a brilliant character and many readers will be able to relate to him. Overall the story is incredible and is a must read. Congratulations on writing this incredible story.

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Usually I don't read romances but I really enjoyed this one for a few reasons. First this isn't the usual sappy and everything's perfect romance, it's dark and show's the struggles and harsh realities that most romances don't usually show.

The characters all feel real and relatable. At points I found myself hating Darren for making foolish decisions like going out and kissing girls even though he's with Kay, but I also felt sorry for him as I knew he didn't mean to ruin his relationship.

Overall it's a great story and one many people will probably enjoy. If you don't like dark realistic books this probably isn't for you.

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I'm not very good at reviews, but even though I don't usually like romances I really did enjoy this story. The characters are intriguing as their views on the world are rather unique and the bullying is something most people can relate to. This story is one I would definitely recommend. I hope you continue writing and I wish you good luck on finishing this and getting in published.

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I really enjoyed this story, the scenes are set beautifully with the descriptions,. The characters are great and believable and well put together. I found myself interested from the very first page right to the end. Overall this is great and I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys reading.

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This story is simply brilliant, you had me hooked from the start and just loved reading it. Fans of adventure, mystery and supernatural beasts will definitely enjoy. Keep writing

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First of all sorry this took a while. The beginning is slow but as you continue reading you are pulled into a story with great characters. There are P.O.V shifts but it's easy to understand who the view is from. Overall the story display tremendous writing talent and would recommend it to anyone.

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Just finished reading what is available and all I can say is, it if great. I can't wait to see how it all ends. Reading the story in different points of view on both sides gives incredible insight on the character's personalities and views of the world around them Keep it up and when its all finished it'll be a great story that people will definitely enjoy.

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