breathing take on a LGBT love story
This is absolutely phenomenal! I loved it from start to finish. Something I absolutely want to commend you on is that varying sexualities of the characters. I really enjoy how it's not made into a big deal and this huge thing. It's just there and no one says anything. I really love that as a lgbt member myself. The relationship Klein has with Elene(?) Is very healthy and I like how even after that got divorce that kept a good friendship. This book lotrally fuc*ed my heart a thousand ways. I was so torn and then supportive. The plot line is amazing, a dominant love story is a very cliche theme but you make it your own. You took a simple used idea and polished and make it is something your own. Also, as someone into BDSM myself you wrote the dominant submissive acts extremely well. The chemistry was amazing. Winter is the definition of a cruel lovable sadist. The quotes you put on the top all add to the story well. It was a smart use a Shakespeare that make your story even better to read. The language the book used was very good, there were no errors I could find. No spelling, typos, or anything grammatical off. The one thing that I didn't understand is so quick Klein fell in love with Winter. It was really fast and out of the blue. I was like wait what and definitely had to reread. You build the tension and the sexual chemistry is out of this world! My only suggestion is push back the falling in love bit for later. I'm going to be following this book because I love it! You are a very talented writer.
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