EroticaFae

A hidden gem!

I really enjoyed the start to this novel. It is written well and you have shown that you can vary your writing style. As in your last book, there were absolutely no grammar or spelling errors. It was completely clean. Which I highly commend you on. My only issue with this story is these, I feel like Jack didn't have enough push for his affair to make sense. It seems like your trying to make him a man who actually does love his wife but justifies cheating on her. I understand that he has "needs" but he talks about how beautiful his wife is and how he loves his son and it makes less sense why he would cheat. I personally think there needs to be more distress in the home to push him into Diane's arm. That is endless you wanted Jack to be fine massive asshole who cheats on his loving wife over sex and in the end gets what he deserves, in the form of psychotic Diane. You have a few ways you could take this in. It's early enough in the story where you can still shape Jack into either person. I just personally think it would make more sense to shape him into the "good guy" who is in a bad sexless marriage or the "fake nice guy" who justifies cheating on his wife and gets screwed. I think this because as I said, at the moment his character's actions don't really add up. Lastly, the erotica and base store of this is written well and I am excited to read more of it. You have a wide range of writing and I commend you heavily for that!

This had me involved start to finish!

This is incredible! Your word choice and story telling abilities are just breath taking. Honestly, I reread a lot of chapters because there were so many details I didn't want to miss a single one! You are a very skilled author. I would not be surprised at all to find this on a bookshelf ! The creation of characters, dialogue and sensory details are again, flawless. They seem like real people and you can easily get inside their heads to understand what is going on. Each character is written completely unique, they each have starkly different personalities and traits. I can just feel all the effort you have poured into this novel. I am very much looking forward to reading any other works you have. This is not usually something I enjoy reading. I prefer erotica, horror, and high fantasy, yet I loved your novel. It was perfect. Even in your grammar and spelling you were flawless. This is not my cup of tea at all but you won me over! I'd like to end my review with telling you again of the incredible talent you have, and I'm definitely going to take notes on the quality of your writing!

Extremely vivid descriptions!

This is common idea (alpha dynamics) taken to a whole different spin. I really enjoy the way you describe "the man" and other characters so far. It is very easy to read, but also keeping up with the vivid adult theme. I am a bit confused on the diffrent classes but I'm sure as the plot develops I will understand better. I rarely add books to my reading list but I am definitely adding this one. It caught my eye for sure! There are a few mirror grammatical errors, nothing terrible or that can't be fixed. Another thing is I would make more clear what was happening in the beginning and how she got where she is now. That was the only part I found a bit confusing as well. Becises that, as I said excellent and will definitely come back to read.

5 star all around!

This is a extremely original idea! It is written and evacuated in a way that makes me desperate for more. Your main character is written beautiful. I love your descriptions and style of sharing some but not all of what is going on. It definitely makes you want to keep reading. I have never seen a concept like this before and I want to commend you for your creativity. There were no errors that I noticed. I was so focused on ths story, even if there were errors I doubt I would have noticed. This is phenomenal! Excellent read through and through.

This is definitely going in my saved novels!

This is creepily, horrify sexy! I love it. This takes a dark and gory spin on erotica. It is written extremely well in a very nuanced style. The writer has a incredible gift for words. Both characters draw you into to their mindsets. Writing such a sadistic character is extremely difficult. I struggle with writing such a level of horror myself and you accomplished it flawlessly. The build between the characters is intense and captivating. I couldn't decide if I was turned on or scared shi*less! This is not a story you will just forget about. This will linger in my nightmares and I couldn't be happier!

breathing take on a LGBT love story

This is absolutely phenomenal! I loved it from start to finish. Something I absolutely want to commend you on is that varying sexualities of the characters. I really enjoy how it's not made into a big deal and this huge thing. It's just there and no one says anything. I really love that as a lgbt member myself. The relationship Klein has with Elene(?) Is very healthy and I like how even after that got divorce that kept a good friendship. This book lotrally fuc*ed my heart a thousand ways. I was so torn and then supportive. The plot line is amazing, a dominant love story is a very cliche theme but you make it your own. You took a simple used idea and polished and make it is something your own. Also, as someone into BDSM myself you wrote the dominant submissive acts extremely well. The chemistry was amazing. Winter is the definition of a cruel lovable sadist. The quotes you put on the top all add to the story well. It was a smart use a Shakespeare that make your story even better to read. The language the book used was very good, there were no errors I could find. No spelling, typos, or anything grammatical off. The one thing that I didn't understand is so quick Klein fell in love with Winter. It was really fast and out of the blue. I was like wait what and definitely had to reread. You build the tension and the sexual chemistry is out of this world! My only suggestion is push back the falling in love bit for later. I'm going to be following this book because I love it! You are a very talented writer.

Wonderful!

I love the emotion and movement in every character. I loved how you described the way things were feeling around the main character and the people around them. It was very easy to slip into their head and feel what they are feeling. This made it a very good read for me because I also write in a same emotionally style. The one downside is, and I do it too, is when so many emotions are involved the sensory details get semi lost. It was hard for me to physically understand what was going on, for example where are they? What does it look like? What does it feel like? Granted, you did include these details sometimes but it wasn't enough for me. I definitely struggle with this too but you need to find a balance between describing the emotional and the physically. You're grammar and spelling were completely flawless though ! This is for sure a book I would read again and I am going to read the sequel, not just to review it but because I want too.

Adore it!

A few minor errors but becises that I loved it! As a queer person myself, I was extremely excited to see this. I love reading good erotica that is not heteronormative. This was extremely enjoyable to read! I loved the characters and the description. Very sexy!

Lovely character development!

I really enjoyed the character and plot development. This story has a very 50 shades vibe which I really enjoyed you look your own spin on it, which for me made it very enjoyable to read. I think your writing style is very descriptive and quirky. It is definitely something I love go read. I love this style of romance as well. You have a few errors but nothing that isnt easily fixed.

Sweet and Sexy!

I really enjoyed this sexy cliche story! Alpha story's are personally a absolute weakness of mine. My only issue was it seemed a bit fast. I would read a chapter and be like oh shit wait what. Becises being a little fast and having some minor error, I really enjoyed the plot and character development. It was really nice to see a plus sized girl star as a sassy heroine lead. I loved how confident and strong she was as a women. Luke, I felt at times was pretty basic bland manly. He bragged a bit to much for my taste and that turned me off to the story. That is the only thing I actually disliked about your book. I did enjoy his character development though and his respect and love for Melissa.