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Gabriel’s Heart

A jolly nice read.

Coming back to the end

Having read the first book of this series and enjoyed it, I can say that I am enjoying this one even more. The writing style and depth has definitely improved for this story. Looking forward to more please!

Alpha Redeemed

Thank you Author. Another lovely read from you. Please keep writing.

Goddess of Destruction

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Broken Duckling

Truly excellent read

Stolen Moon

There is only one word that I can think of that encompasses absolutely everything about this story. That word is outstanding. Thank you very much author.

Bent

Really appreciated the empathy that I could feel for the characters in this story. The author portrayed that extremely well.

The Forbidden Village

A very enjoyable read with lots of things happening that kept my busy mind satisfied.

Not Who I Thought

Another outstanding story from an incredible author. The plot, characters, emotions…..everything was excellent.

The Tiger Pariah and the Runaway

Another brilliant read from a brilliant author.
Don’t stop writing.

Thorn: Death’s Kiss

What a thoroughly enjoyable excellent read. I couldn’t stop reading and love the authors writing style. It all flowed smoothly, had a plot which kept you eager for more and characters that you can really feel for.
Looking forward to the next story. Thank you.

Thorn

A truly delightful read. Really enjoyed the nice long chapters and the attention to details. For a reader, the immersion into a story and how it captivates you is paramount. This story certainly did that.
The author’s writing style is most impressive and I eagerly wait for more.

Sucker for you

Having read all four so far in this series, I’m impressed. I can see the author improve along the way and the writing keeps getting better.
As a reader, I can feel for and understand the characters. The storyline is nicely deepening and keeps the “feel good factor” ultimately. That’s not an easy thing to do, to keep all aspects going and keep a reader still wanting more.
Very good job!!

La Verita

Having only recently, (over the past 6 months), enjoyed your previous stories, this one is still good but so slow on updates and that can put a reader off. This is in no way a slight on your writing skills, as I’m awaiting completion before I read it again and give a considered review.
Please keep going!

The Lost Omega

An excellent story with really good descriptives of the characters. It coaxes the reader in and makes us emotive for the characters.

Bleeding Hearts

What an amazing story that captivated me from the outset.
The author describes the characters well and weaves a good storyline that keeps you wanting for more.
Very impressive.

The Hunter

To begin with, it was a little haphazard in regard to all the characters. It would have been better, (in my opinion), to have taken some time describing them more individually and then to progress with the story.
Having said that, this was a most enjoyable read and I would like to read the next book in this series very much.

The Queen in Shadows

A thoroughly enjoyable read. I look forward to reading more by this author.

What I Needed

An excellently written story. The characters were well defined and the storyline was beautifully intricate. I commend the author for making this a piece of work that brings out such emotion in the writing. (That is a truly great skill).

Purgatory

The build into the story is excellent. The characters are coming into their own now and the growth and development of them is meshing really well with the storyline.

Heal me

Another good story and good as a sequel to your first. (I’ve read them both today…yeah, I read fast ☺️). The character descriptions and depth are far better in this story. The flow is still good and the feelings brought forward from the erotic encounters are excellent.
Looking forward to the next one….

Save Me

Really nice to have a longer story to read. The set up, character descriptions and empathy for Amati’s’ past trauma is all very well done.
A thoroughly enjoyable read!

Bound

Very elegant writing. Beautiful style. Good story and flow. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Remembering Annie

Another excellent story from this author.
It’s so nice to be able to lose yourself completely in a story that is so good. The characters, (other than the main couple), could probably have a little more depth and involvement in the story but other than that…well bloody done!

Love You Anyway

Excellent! Thank you for a lovely read.

Even Monsters Get Lonely

Took a little while for the “dramatic” storyline to come out but appreciated the buildup as it showed the characters off better.
I do hope we can have a sequel developed from this very good base.

The Blood King

A thoroughly enjoyable read. The plot was nicely convoluted. A little more detail and depth of the characters would be my only mild criticism.
Well done

Cruel Feelings

Absolutely brilliant. I couldn’t stop reading from beginning to end. It was especially nice to have a more complicated plot to dig in to. I enjoyed that challenge very much.
The only constructive criticism to give is that sometimes the flow of the story wasn’t quite always tethered to the past.

Zenora

What an absolutely beautiful story to read. The depth and communication between the characters is lovely.
The plot was good, with the right amount of drama versing the amount of delicate emotions of the love between the two main characters.
I got the feeling that this story could have been a lot longer, so I hope for more.

Alpha Rejected

Really enjoyed this story and read it from beginning to end in one hit.
Im very much hoping that there will be sequels to this story by the way it has been left.
It could mean more depth into the characters and the pack family as well as the necessary bit of drama to keep the readers enthralled.
Impressive.

The Alpha’s Breeder

A very good story. Constructively criticising,
I would have liked to see more depth in the description of the characters and probably the point of view from Eros included. A bit more drama with the bad things that happened to Emira. A lot of grammar issues but they don’t matter so much with a good editor to help.
Having said that, a very enjoyable story.

Stronger as one

An absolutely lovely story that was a pleasure to read. The characters were beautifully described and the storyline was well thought out and immensely enjoyable.

Bear With Me

A lovely story with a lovely ending. I very much look forward to reading more from you

Vendetta

The fourth book that I have now read from this author and yet again I have so much praise. I just love your stories…..please don’t stop writing as I love getting immersed in your creations.

Maledetto

It was good to read a sequel in which Caralina gets her happiness but clever to leave it open-ended that the story could carry on. Another thoroughly good read x

Dolore

This was a very emotive read and the author wrote about some very difficult situations. Not an easy thing to do but done well. I enjoyed this book very much and look forward to reading the sequel

Assassino

Another excellent book from this author. It is a great talent to keep readers so engaged that they literally cannot stop reading a story. Thank you and I eagerly await for more x

Bambola

An excellent story which captivated me from the first chapter. The settings and characters were well described, drawing the reader in more and more as the story progressed.
Constructively criticising, the English language and grammar wasn’t good but I assume the author doesn’t speak English as their first language.
Other than that, I enjoyed this story immensely x

Rogue Moon

How wonderful it is to find a story that you can’t keep away from.
Unfortunately for me, I read very quickly and the wait for next chapters being published winds me up a bit.
Having said that, I’m very impressed with your writing and will look forward to more.
Thank you x

Lotus

Outstanding, excellent, ….how can I say more? I read a huge amount of literature daily but rarely I find stories that captivate me entirely.
The depth of characters, the descriptive of the story, I became totally immersed and loved every bit of it.
What an incredible author xxxx

Alpha’s Pet

An excellent story…..until the ending which was horrid.
The descriptives of the characters and situations was great as I could envision and empathise with them wholeheartedly. The flow of the writing is very good too, connecting well. All of this kept me reading with rapt attention.
For constructive criticism, the grammar isn’t good.

Love Bites and Bruises

An outstanding piece of work. Bloody well done El Rivers! I can’t wait to read more. Your writing makes me feel so much for the characters and storyline.

Fate

Lots of heat, a storyline that is developing nicely and I eagerly await the rest.

Survivor

An absolutely brilliant book and I look forward to reading you again. I read a huge amount of fiction and this has earned a place in my top 5. Well done!!!

Cheating Myself

A very enjoyable read and glad it now leads on to another related. Although a newbie to Inkitt, this is already an author I will read all of

The Bank Job

I could see the author grow and develop as this story progressed. I read a huge amount of fiction.
I’m really impressed and would look forward to reading more from this author.
Well bloody done !!!