ABrunetteGirl

Belle鉁 Author on Inkitt and Wattpad (@ABrunetteGirl)馃 Currently writing: If The World Was Ending鈽勶笍 Completed Stories: Trapped Love鉂わ笍 Follow my socials!

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Bibliophile

I loved this book!
As I said on my Instagram yesterday, you have one of the most beautiful writing styles I have ever seen馃槉
You describe things amazingly and right from chapter one I could picture everything perfectly.
The only thing I can suggest, but this is purely my personal preferences, is to shorten the chapters just a bit, I鈥檓 not always the biggest fan of long chapters but I know many other readers are.
Other than that, you truly deserve every read this book gets, well done鉂わ笍

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Counting Stars

Wow I loved this so much and I really wasn鈥檛 expecting this plot at all!
I love how well you convey the emotions of your main character and that you never explain how her friends die but subtle hint which gives the reader all they need to know.
I also love how you link the counting stars.
Just a tiny tip, check over for spelling and punctuation in your first paragraph. It could be broken up a tiny bit and a few commas added but that was the only problem I could find. I love it otherwise!

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