Shawn Kwan

UK

An artist who wants to test her writing abilities. My favourite genres are Romance, Mystery and Fantasy. Also a proud Brit 🇬🇧

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Love the story!

I have a feeling the one-room arrangement will cause a spark between the female and male protagonists 😍😍😍

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Beautifully tragic

Absolute perfection! A beautiful short story depicting a forbidden romance between polar opposites day and night. Tragic ending, but there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel for the lovers

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Intense!

Sorry it took a while, but I've just finished reading your story!

I really liked the chemistry between the main characters of the novel; the sarcastic banter and the flirting. I think in Chapter 3b: Big & Shiny Rejections, I couldn't quite follow the dialogues clearly. Felt a bit all over the place. Also, in Chapter 4: Ghostly Intruders and Concerned Friends, the second and third paragraphs could be spaced out a bit more.

But overall, interesting story with lots of tensions and chemistry between the main characters!

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