ALI NAFE

Lilongwe, Malawi.

You don't start out writing good stuff. You start out writing crap and thinking it's good stuff, and then gradually you get better at it.鈥 Octavia E. Butler

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Nice

I will be honest, this will make a good story. The plot is well thought but what I find difficult for me to follow is how you switch from this characters point of view to another in one chapter. At least if you gave a character a chapter then change to another character POV that did be great. My opinion but it's your story so do it as you see fit.

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Incredible

I loved it鉂も潳鉂も潳

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Lovely

Such a lovely piece of writing. Loved everything about it!鉂

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A beauty

I loved the story a lot! But there room for improvement in terms of editing and punctuation but all in all its a nice story.

I love that she found someone to cherish her and refusing to let her past define her.

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Perfect

This is genius! I've been reading it and I still don't get what's going on. It's like the author wants you to solve a puzzle. I think I will just start again maybe there's something I missed. All in all the story is intriguing, well written, the scenes beautifully told and the dialogue so nice. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more and more. And hold on the names, oh my gosh I like them!

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Loved it

Such a lovely piece of writing. Great job author.

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Another masterpiece

A great story. Loved it so much especially the character of the chicken.

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Incredible

A perfectly written short story. Enjoyed it so much. Highly recommend.

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Intriguing

Loved this story from the start to the finish. Well written characters and wonderful scenes. Job well done. I can't wait to read another story from you!

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Masterpiece

Yet another masterpiece. From book one to this one. Probably one of the stories I've enjoyed so much this year. Everything is perfect and I can't wait to read more of your future works. You're an incredible author and you inspire me! 鉂

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Interesting

This is a very good story. I love how the emotions are shown. How the characters interact and support each other. Very compelling, well written and a job well done to the author.

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Perfection

Such a great read. I love everything about it. And I can't wait to read more and more of this author.
Thank you for such a nice story. I can't wait for more.

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Speechless

Though I'm speechless there's only one word for this story: AMAZING!

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Perfect

This story is complete genius. The writing is on point, the grammar the words the display of emotions everything. What really interested me so much was how everything turned out at the end just completely the opposite of what I imagined. It was perfect.
Job well done to you author and mostly thank you for such a amazing story.

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Crazy In Love

I started reading chapter six of this book and thought I will read just two chapters and move on to another story but I was lying to myself. I read it and read it until chapter 21 and thought of sending the author a message for another chapter or more then I noticed that she updated and I read and finished it but I still can't get enough of it. The plot is so nice, the characters good, the writing on point. You really are doing a good job author. Continue the good work! I can't wait for more and most of all thank you for the story you made my depressing day bright.

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Rubi

I'm completely in love with this story since the day I started reading it. Continue the good work!!!

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Daddy's little pet

Perfect story and I can't wait to see how it ends.

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