Mehad Mohamed

Alexandria, Egypt

A 24-year-old aspiring Egyptian author. Please read my stories, leave reviews and follow me and I will do the same. Thanks in advance 鉂わ笍

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I don't know what to say, really. I have been abused and bullied before so it's somewhat triggering for me. I just don't understand something. Why does he write love , alex at the end of each letter when he hates her so much? (Edit: i think i get it now lol)

It's a good book , and i like it.

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Good job

The story has a lot of potential, but you need to work on your grammar and style of writing more.
I'm sorry for saying that, but for me an honest review is best for the author to improve. So keep up the good work and I'm waiting for your review on "Rose"

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Good job!

Sooo I couldn't leave the book before I read all the available chapters. I'm so excited for the upcoming chapters, and can't wait to read them.
As for criticism, I told you what you should work on in the comments.
But Overall, the story is fantastic, and you are doing an amazing job.馃挄

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Phenomenal!

Well that was amazing! The story is very good and the characters are so different and so well thought out. Everything was exceptionally well done, but I have a few comments and I hope you don't take them personally. I also know that this is an old story so you improved a lot and I'd like you to know that I'm currently reading the unexpected story you published and I'll leave my review soon I hope.

First things first, you should divide the story into paragraphs and pay closer attention to it's structure because it's easy for the reader to get lost when they are reading a big chunk of the chapter in just one paragraph.

Second, this story needs a little editing because there are a few mistakes here and there. They didn't cause any problems for me while reading it, but I thought I'd tell you just in case.

Overall this book is a 10 for me because I really love this type of storyline and the fact that the characters reminded me of one Direction is an added bonus (I love them so much lol)

Ps: I'm so sorry for being this late to write the review I promised you

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There are some grammatical mistakes as well as spelling mistakes. The storyline is good the plot seems well developed and the characters are well presented, but I feel like you need to practice writing more.
I am sorry I don't mean to dishearten you, but you need to work on your writing style. Please don't take that the wrong way.
I wish you all the best 鉂

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Good

I noticed some punctuation mistakes as well as spelling mistakes, but overall you are doing well.

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Wow

Wow! Just wow! These are amazing the description is awesome your imagination is on fire 鉂 keep it up! 鉂も潳

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Loving Dr. Trouble

You are doing an amazing job. I love the storyline so far and I can't wait till you upload the rest of this story鈾ワ笍鈾ワ笍
You are so talented. Keep up the good work鈾ワ笍

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Amazing book

An AMAZING book. Highly recommend reading it 馃挏

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Good job!

You are doing great. The writing style is good. You give the necessary details at the right time. I'm really quite impressed and it's not easy to impress me. You have some minor grammatical mistakes, but overall the plat and development of the story is fantastic.
Keep up the good work.馃挄

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Unraveling Dr. Grey

It's a very good story according to what i read till now . Very interesting and very up my alley.. i will be waiting for the next chapters to be uploaded.

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Five words

Up till now, it's a very good story and your writing style is amazing. I will not put this story down till I finish it honestly. I really really liked it and can't wait to finish it.

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