Awesomely Rotund Elf

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Nice prologue.

The prologue gets you interested in the story.

The descriptions are nice and I could see the scene in my mind, shame that it was a evil person smalling someone's else head on the ground.
It seems a nice read, and while I haven't read much yet, I hoping the compelling style from the start will keep throughout the rest of the book.

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Nice storytelling.

I've read just three chapters at the moment of this review.

The setting is nice, even if gave me vibes of something I had already read before. The prose is compelling, but there are some misspelled words here and there, or some errors between first and third person. Nothing that will kill the enjoyment of reading the story.

I'm a sucker for FxF romance, so I'm hoping there'll be some! (Fingers crossed!)

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Interesting world.

At the time of this review, I've read four chapters.

The setting is interesting. A mix of fantasy and contemporary setting. I can make some guesses based on the details, although there is still a lot to learn about the world.
It was nice and peaceful , but I think more will happen as she begins her quest.

Overall, I like the story, although I think it needs some editting work. Some sentences sound a little off at times and there is some repetition of words, but nothing that is really bad.

I'm hoping for a sweet romance, so I'll wait until there are more releases to binge it to my heart's content.

Thanks for your work!

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A great start.

While I don't usually like love story, this one had a solid start.
Authors style is good and the words kept flowing.

A good choice for those who enjoy romances.

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Solid first chapter.

Interesting first chapter.

Gearing to read the rest, but so far so good!

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