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Hi, I am Aria, and I love cats, coffee, and stories in any form: books, movies, and video games. I write as a hobby, and I write from the depth of my heart. I hope you like my stories.

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Entertaining

I like the fact that it explains just enough to make you imagine the rest. I really enjoyed it, good work dear author.

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Entertaining

It is brilliant, I like the way the story flows, and although I don't like Jessica, I understand her; your story is outstanding, especially because I'm afraid of giving life to someone myself, so it is double interesting for me.

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Magical

It is amusing and exciting; the scene in the big room reminded me of a scene in the witcher series, which I liked a lot; I liked that it has a fast rhythm; well done.

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It is unique

I like it; it is a unique and new story, and I am curious to see what will happen. I just hope there be a witch somewhere in the story

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Entertaining

Not bad, but it is a bit cliche; it reminds me of early 20th-century edgy books but is still interesting to read; good job. and the two-color text is a little unnecessary and eye bothering.

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Entertaining

I like it, it is fun and exciting but a little cliche, if I want to be honest, and the story goes a little fast, and I prefer it when the characters do little side quests, but it is my personal opinion, so it doesn't mean anything particular, I really liked your story overall it is well written.

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It is fun

I like how the story is told from different points of view; it reminds me of twilight { just kind of ] but more toxic and dangerous; I also like to meet a few originals in the story, so keep writing, you talented author.

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I like it

I Like post-apocalypse stories, and this one has potential; keep up the good work, friend; it is just a little cliche, so try to avoid it in the future.

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A fun story

I really like it so far. It flows smoothly but a little fast for my personal taste. I really enjoyed it so far

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