everblack

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what u have done for me

Hey, everblack here i adore the characters you hhave created here.They really help to portray the stroy and i would appreciate it even more if you finished ignite.aThey are so captivating that you never want to put them down.I started My gcse this year and your books have helpeed to lift some of that weight off my shoulders and to give

me something to look foreward to every week.

Never stop writing
-everblack
p.s-if you stop writing this i will be so upset

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wow

I don't know what to say. It's just incredible. That ending was a bit sudden I will admit but I won't be too bothered as long as a second book is written.

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its too short

When i started it seemed to be a great story but the idea of having the breaker of the spell be water is very unrealistic.I mean what if they were caught in the rain.The spell would where off.oh and you never specified which human is which dog. The at was very confusing. I really want to say something positive about ti but I cant. Sorry.I hope this helps you improve.

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eeehhhh

i mean its ok but you go into too much depth too quickly.You cant force information upon the reader.Some parts they need to work out for themselves

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just wow

i cried at the end i loved it so much.This should become a amovie.Never stop writing
yours truly
everblack

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wow

this is one of the best bboks ive ever read

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