Interesting & Promising
I really liked the story. I especially the friendship between the girls, very honest and realistic.
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The overall plot of the story is definitely very engaging and interesting. A page turner, as we would have said if it was in a physical copy hah.
The only advice I can offer to the very promising writer is to edit a bit more and go over some of the spelling.
Another tip, which may be useful, would be, in my opinion, if the writer was more consistent with the tense in which the story is told. I noticed in several of chapters that half a sentence is in present time and then sudden the other half in past tense.
Lastly, and I think I saw that someone had already mentioned it- don't be as descriptive. It is difficult when writing, I know, I do it too, but there doesn't need to be that much description following the dialogue.
Loved it, would recommend it and would definitely keep reading it.