Farryn Thane

Leeds, England

My name is Farryn Thane, a freelance writer from the UK

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5/5 story

A very well written short story that held onto my curiosity till the very end. The writing and development of the characters was good and I was left wondering what will happen to the main protagonist. I would certainly recommend this story to someone who wants a short dark, romance short story to read.

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A fantastic read!

I remember when I lacked my laptop and I had to resort to using my phone in order to use social media and Inkitt, and this book was one of the first that I read. Each page captivated my attention and I fell in love with each and every character, especially Eliana and Oriens, Even the antagonists got some love from me! You've really shown the developments of each character, from how they've grown from the first page they appeared on, to how their relationships with each other have developed.

The book really reminds me of Christopher Paolini's 'Inheritance Cycle' Series (Especially with Oriens' personality reminding me of Saphira from time to time), but you added a good change to the concept of dragon riders and how things work. Though, the story does follow the usual fantasy concepts of the typical fantasy races (elven and humans, etc), it is an excellent read, none the less.

Thank you for writing a wonderful book and keep it up with the next ones!

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