Fauzia Tabassum

Good Job!

The story has been well written. I was expecting a bit more action and horror but still, it is good. Your writing style is good but it might be difficult to understand for those whose first language is not English. I want to know more about the Lord in the castle so please update soon :)

A good teenage story

I overall liked the novel. I suggest you describe the scenes a bit more, especially the characters. I love how you create suspense. It was difficult for me to picture how the characters look like.

Cute story

Your writing style is very good. I felt like as if scenes were playing in front of me. The plot is good and has the potential to be turned into a series of amazing mythological books.

Good work!

This is overall a good novel. Two main social issues have been targeted. I am looking forward to what happens next.

The Twins.

It's good. Keep up the good work.