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In my opinion, the length of the story with its plot was perfectly fine. But I think that the end was a little bit to much of hate towards Lissana, don't get me wrong I belive that the reactions of the characters were well choosen but it is missing the little spark that makes a story complete (maybe I am just a do-gooder >.< )
All in all, a nice little story for in between :)

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