Read the story now
I enjoyed reading the first six chapters last night 'til about 3 in the morning. Meaning I loved your story, your style, your plot that I forgot the time. Although I know the movie version of 2004 which was my first movie from "the Phantom of the Opera" and am too a phangirl in my own way. ;-) What really made this story entertaining to read was by adding the character Brie/Brieanna and how her reaction would be when she saw Erik, the Phantom and of course the other important characters like Raoul, Meg and the new opera owners.
Keep up with writing and don't doubt yourself. It's great! ^.^
A small correction in chapter 20 or 21 with French language, Goodnight is bonne nuit and not bonsoir. Bonsoir is good evening.