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Quin Kimler
Creativity is my life, I live in a small town, and I love to read, write, and draw in my spare time. There is definitely nothing wrong with expressing yourself no matter who you are ^^
Pretty good so far!
So far, I think this story had an interesting start, and your characters were all pretty interesting as well. Oh boy, though, having someone cheating on you is definitely not pretty, especially that jerkwad, Max. Ellie sure is lucky, though, to have good friends at her side!
As I read this, though, I did notice some grammar mistakes that could use some fixing, and some words could've also been replaced with something else to make it look better. Overall though, I think you did a pretty good job with this. So keep it up, looking forward to more of this!
I officially love this story!
I was going to give my review after I read all twenty chapters you have so far, but I couldn't wait to review this and I'm halfway there to the next chapters I have to read next. All I have to say is that this is the best science fiction story I have read so far! The characters are so interesting to read about and the plot of this story is so good that I don't even wanna stop reading this! Honestly, your writing style truly is amazing and the more I read this story the more I get hooked on it! There were a few grammar errors that I noticed, but even with those flaws I think this is a spot on story you made! I applaud you for coming up with a very interesting world with very interesting species of aliens and such! I look forward seeing more from you in the future and I cannot wait for the next chapters to come from this incredible story-even though I still got halfway more to read!
Read the story nowA pretty good read!
I must say I'm liking where this story is going and I'm especially loving the conflict that is now happening! I really do like this style that's being used in this story and most of the details I read were pretty good as well! There were a few grammar mistakes and I believe what looked to be a couple words missing in a couple of paragraphs, but I would say overall this was worth the read! Nicely done once more and I will definitely look forward to the next chapters of this story!
Read the story nowLove it!
The moment I read that prologue I immediately loved where this was going and I cannot wait to see more chapter come, great job!
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