Fireheart

New Plymouth

A book is more than words upon a page ,they are stories that interact with your soul and bring adventure to our lives.

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to the naked eye what builds a heart.

The plot of this story is something else i'm amazed at the few chapters that have been put up and i'm already enjoying this story so much. The words flow really well and you sentence structure is pretty good. i have picked up a few words that don't match a sentence here or there but that's ok everyone's story has something to work on. Honestly i'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what you do next. Happy writing and have a good day i will be sure to keep up with your updates on this story.

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An amazing mystery read.

I like your plot and writing style. This story has made me want to keep reading when I should be sleeping. I love all your ideas and the way you have placed them into words for all of us to understand. Keep writing and I look forward to reading future stories of yours.

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A must read mystery.

I love the development of this story from the first to this second. I love how you have written it in Boris perspective. You have kept me on my toes the Whole time and it's made me only want to read your stories more. Your writing style and plot planning is amazing. I've barely picked up any mistakes. Please keep writing I would like to see more of your work. Be safe and good luck on your journey.

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His love.

I love the plot of this short story. With the few words that you have written I have fallen in love with your story and it has connected with my heart. I like your creative ways of explaining things and connecting the story together. I have noticed that you have very few grammar mistakes which is great, however I have noticed that you do not stick to a tense in your writing. Like past, present and future tense. You can jump from present to past tense in one sentence. Which is not a bad thing you just have to make sure that the sentence lines up and makes sense. Overall I love the way you write and I like the story very much and I'm sorry if I came off as rude. There is nothing wrong with your writing it's very inspiring and very passionate. Just get someone to check over your grammar. Please keep writing I would love to see more from you and I will happily check out you other books.

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