FixieGirl

Greatalisious story

Fantastic story. One of the best I've seen on inkitt. Fantastic story. Fast paced and the action starts right away. It is completely original as far as I am concerned. A great read! To anyone out there, definitely read it.

Good story but hard to follow

It's a good story and all but I agree with the other reviews. It is slightly hard to follow why? Why did Noss take the bow and send Kolena away. Why did he follow her after. I mean the story is different and everything about Noss is 'mighty' or 'massive'. I hope you take the time to edit the story because it has a lot of potential as one of the most popular stories on inking but right now it is just unshaped.

The doll house

Its a good spooky story. I would recommend it to everyone who likes a good scare. I got really involved and i felt sad when I heard about the missing posters and that Abigail is dead. This is a great story.

Nice story

I love your story. the plot and characters are awesome though Eliana is slightly Mary sueish (parents tragic death, Quite obvious prophecy etc.) i love it! I especially love dragons and riding them and this story is all about that so its a REALLY GOOD STORY. im telling all my friends to read it so i hope they do soon. again, i LOVE this story

I Like it

This is a good story so far. Most of the stories I've read, the earth kids are brought to the fantasy world but why not the opposite? I promised I'd read this on fanfiction and I'm impressed. I will be happy if you continue.

I like the Twist

I like the Twist where the hero is an arrogant toerag and the assistant actually does everything but the hero takes the credit. I really look forward to reading more. I didn't see any grammar or punctuation mistakes but I usually don't. I got really absorbed and I like the idea that you put in the story. The Quest stuff is old but you added a new twist to it by letting the wizard make a mistake and it gives a 'normal' person aura. This indicates that nobody in your world is perfect. Isaac seems weird to say the least but I like him. Definitely continue.

Nice Story

It's a Nice Story. I like the idea of people in space who have to pass excessive training to become pilots. The crystals are a good idea but the story is slightly unshaped. It's an idea. Edit it a bit and maybe revise because the story is confusing. I'm really confused about what happens. The parts I could understand were good. Definitely keep writing.

One of those Real Gems

This is one of those gems that really leaves an aftertaste (figuratively) in your mouth and wanting more. There's that feeling of mystery that you don't know what actually happened and you can only assume. Yet, you can't really assume anything because that would ruin the mystery feeling of the story. As with all stories this one also has some room for improvement. What is the main character's name. I can only assume it's June. I hope Erin Swan keeps writing!

Nice story

I really like your story. I only rated it four because i am not the biggest fan of blood. It is a good story and i would recommend it to anyone and everyone. The twist at the end was really unexpected and jazzed things up a bit. It is a good story. Keep on writing!