Moonlitsummer/ A.Pancho

Arcadia Bay

Hi! Welcome to my profile filled with stories that my head generates once in every few months or years lmao. Whether I die young or old, I'm sure that I want to write for the rest of my life.

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Short but memorable

I have never read anything like it. At first I felt overwhelmed from the information being addressed at first the two chapters. I wasn’t good at history but it was executed very well. It’s given a preview of the lives of soldiers who had participated in the war. That even after the horrifying event, their battles continued on through their daily lives. The ending of the book had my heart ache badly. It was sad how two brothers had turned against each other. But one couldn’t blame the other. Both had their reasons to come up with decisions that eventually lead to their demise. I understood Herbert but it was a struggle to not be empathetic of Philip. The story telling was on point, and I finished it in one sitting!

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Blown Away

. I'm picky with books. It's a bad habit that if I tend to not like it I go M.I.A. But like a whirlpool, I got sucked in at its very first page. It's hard writing, there's no doubt about that. That's why I'm so amazed by how well it's written. The characters come alive, and the background as well. Everything is detailed, as if I was living in that moment. And a good written book means only one thing- Determination, Passion and talent! Calypso is confident and strong, well she's been trained that way. But what makes me cling onto her unconsciously was how quirky she was. Her interactions with Cole is a breath of fresh air. While they squabble, I secretly squeal inside. This definitely is a book I'll be reading to the very end of its chapters. Lots of Love!

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Truly Captivating

Even on the first chapter I was stunned by how everything was described, by how everything was put together. And in general, just how great it was written! I instantly connect with the characters. I barely knew any of them, but it was almost as if I could feel their pain. I'm just awestruck. The question I'm hoping the author would answer is, how often does updates happen? I need more of this!!!

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Facade

It's hard to do a review when I have not totally grasped a majority of the story. However, I could tell that work has been put onto every chapter. Plot, although slightly still vague, is been well expressed on the the description. I liked the way the words were used and played. If given more improvement I'm definitely sure this book would be outstanding! I'm looking forward to Scarlet's story. Maybe even gush on her romance with somber Xavier. Just imagining the character development of these two is exciting!

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