Patrick Johns

Patrick Johns is a systems engineer who graduated from Virginia Tech in 2015. He is now living in the Washington D.C. area and has grown an interest in writing.

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Short but exciting

The Prince was an exciting read. I enjoyed the spoiled bratty protagonist and his drastic change through out the story. The world building was well though out and clear. The author did a great job painting a picture for the reader without having a map. I liked the connection to real life leaders. I thought that was cleverly done. The battle scenes were a bit drawn out but very detailed. I suggest cutting the battle short or creating more personal conflict inside the war with the protagonist. Overall I enjoyed reading this story and I definitely want to find out want happens in the second part!

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