Stormie Stafford

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I write Paranormal Mysteries with a lot of comedy. I love reading and writing, Tai Chi, well, all Martial Art forms

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My Name Is Not Cupcake

I loved your story. The way you show the emotions through words was really good. I even loved the cliffhangers.

You did have a few misspelled words, missing words, and punctuation misses, but that's easy to fix.

I use free Grammarly. It helped me with my punctuation mostly, but it also helped with spelling and with different word choices.

Good Luck with your writing.

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Counting Stars

I love this story. You have a great gift for writing that not a lot of people have. Good luck with the rest of it and I can't wait to read more.

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To Cross The Devine: A Chance Encounter

A very well written story and one I enjoyed very much.

Keep on writing, please.

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The Fire Seal

First off, I loved this story. I felt like I took a journey with the characters.

It was well written and easy to get caught up in this story.

Good job! I'm ready for some more.

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The Reality and The Dream

I enjoyed this story. It was unusual but good. I wish there would have been more though.

Good job.

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Thor, touched by thunder

This was such a well written book. I love all the facts in this story, well, the facts that scholars know. You have an amazing way to bring in your readers.

I know I will be reading this over and over again, it was just that great. I will also be recommending this story to all my friends.

Good luck, although I don't think you will need it.

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Vampire's Pet

I really enjoyed this story. The characters were relatable. They made you want to laugh, scream, cry, and hurt someone (mainly Layla).

You did have a lot of spelling issues, but that is something that is easily fixed. I would love to read again when it's edited.

Great job!

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The Greater Good, Labors of Thomas Royce book one

You have the plot going on and the fighting and weapon types. I am a weapons freak so this kept me very interested. The fighting scenes made me feel as if I was right there with them fighting. I loved that.

Did you have some punctuation and spelling errors? Yes, but who doesn't. I know you will go back and fix these and when you do I will make sure to review again.

Great job!

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Ride a Cowboy

I have never laughed or cried so much. I was there with Pierce and her dad when they beat the crap out of that creep. Your characters are so life like that it's hard not to see them as real. This is the true meaning of imagination.

Yes, you had some things you needed to fix, but not that many.

Great job!

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The Hunter

I love your writing. You took me on an emotional rollercoaster. With the mystery and suspense, you had me at the edge of my seat every time I turned around..

A story worth reading.

Thank you for a terrific story, can't wait for the next one.

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He Healed My Heart

Great writing. No, wait! Beautiful writing. I could read your stories every day, but I promised to read others too.

Your characters seem so real as if they were someone you would know. The comedy in places is too hilarious.

I can't wait to read the next story about Lexi.

Great job!!!

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Mate to the Dragon

I loved this story and can't wait for a sequel. You write well.

I loved the lore on dragons that you have incorporated into your story. Makes me feel for each character.

Keep up the great job!

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Thicker Than Blood: Awakening

Oh. My. Goodness! I need more, please.

Loved this story! Great characters, beautiful writing, and a great plot. What more can anyone ask for?

Great Job!

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My Cowboy

All I have to say is bravo. You write so beautifully.

Your characters come to life in your story and you end up feeling what they feel. To me that is the best book of all.

Great Job! Can't wait to read more of your stories.

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Artemis

What a great story so far. I loved the characters and you made me feel as I was in Artemis's shoes.

You write beautifully. Although their were only two spelling corrections that needed fixed, I still gave you a five since I know you will fix these.

Great writing and I can't wait to read more.

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The New Boy's

I love your writing. Everything about it appeals to me. You should be proud of yourself.

I know I will read anything you write and I don't just say that.

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When the Shadows Bite

I loved the basis of this story, the characters, the twists and turns, and the crazy. It was different but in a good way.

You do have a lot of misspelled words and punctuation errors that need to be fixed. I know I mentioned Grammarly to you. I know I mentioned how it saved me with my punctuation considering I was a comma commander.

I really hope you fix everything. I would love to read it again.

Good Luck to you in your writing career.

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What Goes Bump In the Night

Your plot is very interesting and different, which I liked very much. I loved the way the characters seemed to come alive.

There were a lot of misspelled words--something easy to fix.

Great Job! Happy writing.

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Out Of Light

Oh. My. Goodness. This story was amazing. The ending is something to read as well as the rest of the story. I was cheering for Cleo then I was cheering for her mate.

I sincerely hope you are writing another sequel to this story. But I would read anything of yours. You have a great writing style. Amazing imagery.

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In The Shadows

You have a special way of bringing your characters to life. You feel their love, their hate, their confusion, their disgust, their emotions, and their laughter. It's something not a lot of writers know how to do. I loved your story. It made me feel so many emotions, and had me sitting on the edge of my seat.

Way to go!

Yes, you have some editing that needs to be done, but you said you needed to at the beginning of your story.

Good Luck with your writing career.

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Solstice Howl

I can't wait for more of this story. I enjoyed it a lot.

There are some wording problems. Such as respectful instead of disrespect. Some words such as I's.

But you have a great story here.

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Innocent Prisoners

I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I was asked if I would read and I am so glad I did.

The only problems I could see were a few missing words or a mix up of his and hers. Other than that I thought this was excellent and can't wait for more.

Keep on Writing.

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Blue Eyed Beast

I was on the edge of my seat through the whole story. It captured me with the characters. I was caught off guard a few times.

I loved all the twists and turns in this story. You beautifully brought out each character; their heartache, their fears, their love, and yes, their snarkiness..

There were only a few mistakes. Example: Pasted instead of past, or when they were talking about not having trust.

Great Job!

Now I want to read more about these characters. I want to see what became of them.

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Lybrinth - Rhett

Annnd you did it again with this story. Excellent writing. I have loved every story I have read of yours. Please keep writing.

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Ruby Red

I loved this story. All the twists, turns, and mystery. I kept rooting for Ruby the whole way through this story. You actually make your characters feel alive.

All around, hands down.
The. Best. Story. Ever.

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Labyrinth

Another beautifully written story. You have magic in your words that transport the reader into the story. I feel like I'm living their life, their trails, and their fears. It's what keeps me reading a story.

I gave you all five stars, including punctuation. There are a few problems, but they are easily fixed. Grammarly is what I use and it's free.

But Great Job!

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Alpha's Don't Play

A very beautifully written story. I felt as if I was there with the characters.

The only thing I can see that needs to be fixed; is the punctuation and a few missing words.

Great Job! I enjoyed what I read, but I hope there's more to this story or at least a sequel.

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Blood Moon Luna

I really enjoyed your story. I felt as if I was with the characters, living vicariously through them.

You need a little work on your punctuation, but that can be fixed quickly. Especially if you download Grammarly for free. Sure helped me.

Good Luck with your writing and please do a sequel to this story. I would love to read about the big evil that's coming.

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The Culling

I enjoyed this short story very much.

There were a few problems with words running into the other words and some words not spelled correctly, but that is easily fixed.

Great Job and keep on writing.

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Dominant Species

I have read all your stories now and I must say you are a terrific author. I enjoyed this story, but I want more. Please do a series.

There were a lot of him/his or he/she that need to be corrected, but that's easy to fix.

Great Job!

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Rose

A very well written story. I love how the cliffhangers keep you at the edge of your seat, or chair.

A few missing words, but overall a very good read.

Thanks for writing this.

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Stolen Birthright

I loved all the twists and turns in this story. The action, romance, mystery, and fantasy was superb.

There were a lot of misspelled words in this story--more than your other stories.

Good luck and thank you for another great story.

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My Mystery Mate

Thank you again for an amazing story. I have enjoyed all of your stories and I think I have just two more to read but read I will.

I feel like I have been on a whirlwind of mystery, deceit, and action. Add Romance in there and it's a great story.

Thank you

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Between the Were Wars

And you come up with another great story. Why aren't you published yet?

I loved it. The action, romance, and suspense kept me reading. I love the characters. You make me feel as if I'm there with them.

Way to go!

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After the were wars

Another great story. You could make a lot of money publishing stories. You are just that goo.

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Luna's Angel

Another great story. The writing is superb and keeps me wanting more.

Great Job!

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Order of Protection

I have to say that all your stories have been great, so far. I love the emotion you put in your stories. It definitely carries over to the reader.

Thanks so much for another great story.

You had me sitting on the edge of my chairs, screaming at times, and laughing at others.

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The Last Shewolf

I love reading your stories. They are so full of emotions, emotions that the reader feels a part of. The action, romance, and hope you feel keeps the reader entertained throughout the whole story.

There were a couple of words, that a spell checker wouldn't catch since they weren't misspelled, but just the wrong word. Such as; feel instead of feed. I still gave this 5 stars considering it is something that can be fixed quickly.

Thanks for an entertaining read.

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Slave Lunas

Very good story. Even though it was shorter than your other stories this was a good read.

Keep up the great work.

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Treasure

This is the best book I have ever read on Inkitt. It was moving, romantic, heartbreaking, and full of action and suspense.

There were only a few past and present tense problems, but it's something easy to fix. I won't rate a 4 just because of those problems.

Great job! I hope there is more. I would gladly read anything you write.

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The Mating Ball

I wasn't sure I was going to like this story, but I did. It was unusual, like nothing I have read before.

There were a few spelling mistakes, but overall, great job.

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Defying The Alpha

This was a great story full of twists and turns. You never knew what was going to happen next, which kept this very interesting.

Yes, there are some misspelled words, but if you read the beginning it does tell you that there will be.

Great job!

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A Warrior's Love

Great story. You can feel the push and pull with the characters. It makes you want to help, makes you cry, makes you excited for them.

I would love to read this again when the corrections are done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Saving Maximus

I would love to give this story a better rating and I will when the past and present tenses are fixed, punctuation, and spelling.

The plot of the story is awesome. You feel the emotions of the characters..

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Sex with an Alpha

You are great storyteller, but you need a lot of work on your grammar and punctuation.

I enjoyed all of the story, even the extra chapters. Your characters seem so real and it's as if you can feel their emotions while reading.

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Heart of Stone - Book 1: Fighting Fate

I have read almost all of your stories in 1 1/2. I have loved each of them and can't wait to read the next one.

You are definitely one of the best storytellers I have read in a while. I have enjoyed each and every one of them.

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Heart of a Beast

You have the best technical writing skills I have ever seen. Every word you write makes you feel as if you are that person or interacting with the person.

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The Forgotten Claim

I have to say this was one of the best-written stories about werewolves I have ever read.

The plot was great and the emotions you could feel in the telling of this story were as if you were with them.

I wanted to cry at times (and I don't cry), I wanted to yell at other times, and root for them the rest of the time.

Great job!!!

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Pleasured by the Pack

This was a beautifully written story. I enjoyed the play between the characters and fully intend to read this story again.

Great job!

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The Alpha King's Daughter

I loved this story. You did an excellent job. I felt like I was there with the characters and couldn't wait to see what would happen next.

The only thing I would work on would be punctuation and spelling. Download Grammarly and look at a novel of your favorite author. It helps so much.

Good Luck with your writing and I would love to see this as a series.

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Fang Claw

Girl, you can write.
This was one of the best stories I have ever read. I had already read Coal and both were beyond great.

I see a published novel in your future.

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The Lego Movie

I'm not a big fan of rewritten movies, but I have really enjoyed this one so far.
Yes, there are spelling and punctuation that could be better, but for the first book, you did a good job.

Don't give up, keep writing. It takes a little while to start feeling the flow.
Good Job!

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Alpha's Mermaid

This was a great story with a lot of twist in the plot. I enjoyed it so much that I read it in 4 hours.
The only thing I can say is to download Grammarly or check your spelling.
But overall==I would recommend this story.

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Caged

I thought this was a great story. You just need to back and check for missing words.

There is also a few problems with past and present tenses. Other those minor problems (which can be easily fixed) this was a well-written store with a lot of twists.

Keep up the Great work and please write a sequel to compliment this story.

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The Alpha's Baby Boy

A very different story from what I have read so far.

The technique is so much that I thought I was reading a published novel.

Good job! Thanks for a great story and can't wait to read more of your work.

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The Death Wolf's Call

I loved this story. It was well written and very interesting. It kept me guessing which I love.

There a few words that weren't correctly spelled in this story, but the punctuation is superb. I can't wait to read the next one.

Good luck to you in your writing, but I seriously don't think you will need it.

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The Bad Boy And The Cheerleader

I liked the teenage angst that your characters go through and how you portray them.

Your punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure need a little work. You have a few places where they are words missing that should be in the sentence I know I tell this to everyone, myself included. Download Grammarly, it's free and will help with misspelled words, punctuation, and even different word choices.

I did get a little confused between American words then right after a London word.

Overall you did a remarkable job with your characters and should be proud of yourself.

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The Chosen One

I enjoyed this book. I loved the plot twists and the realistic way you described teens and mates. There were a few slow chapters, but it kept getting better and better.

I loved the end of the book. Enough said I don't want to give away your story.

Keep up the great Job.

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I Broke Into The Alpha's House

This story made me mad, then sad, then happy.

You have a wonderful way of telling your story, but the punctuation and spelling needed work. But this is a story I will let my friends know about.

Good Luck to you.

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Were-Mutt

A great story with a lot of things going on, but in a very good way. A very well written book.

This book is different, which makes it fun to read.

You don't want to miss reading this book. If you do then you lost out on a great treasure.

Happy Writing and keep up the great job. I, for one, will be looking for new chapters. This is the best book have read so far.

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The Unexpected Mate

I loved the drama and mystery in this book. Your writing skill is so good, with a few misspelled words or punctuation. There was also a chapter missing and 2 different chapters that repeated.

But, I. Loved. This. Book.

Keep on writing.

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The Alpha's Secret

This is a well written and thought out book with only a few punctuation mistakes and past and present tenses mixed up.

But it is a novel I will definitely be telling everyone about.

Great Job!

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Blue Raspberry

A very well written book. The storyline was incredible even though it was a short story.

Great Job!

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Elements: the gifted

This was a very well thought out book. I enjoyed the characters and the mystery.

It would have been five stars if not for a few misspelled words and missing words. The past and present tenses were mixed up a lot, but overall an excellent story.

I will be recommending this book to my friends to read.

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Tied To Darkness

This has a great twisting plot. The writer has the very best imagination and her writing skills are superb.

There are a few typo's, a few extra words, and a few words that need to be changed, but overall this is one of the best stories I have read.

Very entertaining and the characters come to life under the writer's hand..

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Undercover Husband

Great book! Chapter by chapter I was hooked. Just when you thought there couldn't be any more to the story you were surprised again by something else.

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Pather's Cage

I have to say this is one of the best novels I have read in a long time.

It was perfectly written and the characters were spot on. I couldn't believe the interaction between each one. I laughed in some parts and wanted to cry in others.

Thank you for a GREAT novel.

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The rejection

I loved the plot of this story. It was unique and I thoroughly enjoyed it..

The only thing I could see was missing words in between sentences.

There were only a few grammatical errors that I could see. I would definitely love to see a sequel to this novel. I want to know what happens after. Great Job! And keep up the great writing.

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Servant of the Moon

I loved your story and the characters in it. I felt like I was truly there with them. There are just a few punctuation problems and as I said before, when you speak of Del sometimes you said he and then she.

This was a cliffhanger and I loved every minute of it.

Good Luck with your writing career.

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Falling for the Alpha

This was one story I couldn't quit reading and that is the highest compliment I can think of, considering I am an avid reader and new Author. The plot couldn't have been any better or unique.

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Stormy Stafford

This is one of the best-written stories I have ever read. The plot is something that keeps you on the edge of your seat and keeps you reading until you are done. Great Job!

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The alpha killer

I loved this story. I can't wait to see what's next. I'm sure it will bring everything together, and Todd will get his.

Thanks for a very riveting story.

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Wear Wars is great

I was reading this remarkable story, but when I got to the end I was screaming 'No'. I wanted to know what happened to Renee,. How the pack was weares were doing.. Loved It. I

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