fortherestofourlife

Hello, I am here to try new things and even if it doesn’t work am still happy!! I love reading ,writing, dogs and food! It’s nice to meet you🙃

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Cupid’s heart

I suggest you to break down the paragraphs, I am still learning too so I not a professional but I think you should try to elaborate or give a good description, I suggest you read others book too to understand the style. Overall all, good plot and have a good potential. Keep on writing, at first it will feel like you are not good from the comments but believe me you as you continue further you will understand yourself, and improve. That's how I learned.
I hope it doesn't offend you :)

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Mythwield: Fairytale of Lyore

I suggest to write more dialogue it will make your story even better. Writing in long paragraph can make your story a bit messy. But overall I think a very good effort! Keep writing that’s how we learn 😊

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A new World

I have nothing much to sat, your writing style is good! And so is your plot there are few punctuations missing but that's okay. We write we learn. I am not an expert so I can't really say anything. But your story is amazing!!!! Keep up the work

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