fortherestofourlife

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Fated

The plot was super intriguing the only thing drawback I found was that it was quite confusing I couldn’t comprehend who was saying to whom, it was quite messy and felt rushed. I am not a grammar expert at all but I think it was quite up to the mark! It was a new writing style for me so it took me a while to get used to but it was something new! I totally recommend reading it till the end as the mystery unravels.

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Cupid’s heart

I suggest you to break down the paragraphs, I am still learning too so I not a professional but I think you should try to elaborate or give a good description, I suggest you read others book too to understand the style. Overall all, good plot and have a good potential. Keep on writing, at first it will feel like you are not good from the comments but believe me you as you continue further you will understand yourself, and improve. That's how I learned.
I hope it doesn't offend you :)

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Mythwield: Fairytale of Lyore

I suggest to write more dialogue it will make your story even better. Writing in long paragraph can make your story a bit messy. But overall I think a very good effort! Keep writing that’s how we learn 😊

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